[Gen-art] Pre-telechat review of draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-09

Tom Taylor <tom.taylor.stds@gmail.com> Wed, 19 August 2015 18:37 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Pre-telechat review of draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-09
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Document: draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-09
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 19 Aug 2015
IETF LC End Date: 2015-08-05
IESG Telechat date: 2015-08-20

Summary: This reviewer's previous comments have been addressed.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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