[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-04
Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> Wed, 02 September 2015 08:01 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-01-2015 IETF LC End Date: Jul-27-2015 IESG Telechat date: Sep-03-2015 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a BCP, but has a nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] The draft updates BCP 101 to fix some issues around the beginning and end of IAOC terms. This version simplifies the fix from the previous version I reviewed. I’m not entirely certain it covers the vacancy filling case for IAOC members that appeared in version -01, but given the vigorous arguments that have already taken place, I’m going to let that slide. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits: Section 2, item 3: change the first comma to a semicolon. And I sure hope nobody requests a precise definition of “close”.