[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Mon, 22 February 2016 20:19 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2016-02-22 IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use. -[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is what we want to convey. -[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3" Best regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Suhas Nandakumar (snandaku)
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Jari Arkko