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"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Wed, 04 May 2016 10:46 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-ip-04
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2016/5/4
IETF LC End Date: 2016/4/12
IESG Telechat date: 2016/5/5

Summary: Ready with one issue

The document is well written and complete, but requires a good understanding of BFD (RFC 5880, RFC 5881) and of the use-cases (draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case) document.

In my initial review I raised two issues. One was accepted and an editorial change was made in draft-04. The second one was:


-          This document extends the usage of port 3785 adding the function of being the destination port for the S-BFD echo packets. Should not this be regarded as an update of RFC 5881 and mentioned as such on the front page?

The authors answered the following:


-          I do not have a strong opinion one way or another - I will leave this one to the AD's guidance, and I am happy to mark this document as updating RFC 5881 if that's the preferred direction

No change was made. I would like to make sure that the responsible AD has seen this comment. It's not a show-stopper, but I still believe that marking this document as an update to RFC 5881 is better.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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