Re: [Geopriv] I-DAction:draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-08.txt

Thanks to Mary for the hard work put in updating the document.  I've just submitted lis-discovery, which should be compatible.

There are a few minor errors in the latest additions:

The ABNF should reference RFC 5234.

The ABNF requires spaces on the outside of the square brackets (but not inside of).

The ABNF for HELDREF-URI still uses 'helds://'

The 'port' component is still optional in the ABNF.  Without a default value, it makes no sense to allow its omission.

The examples that show the HTTP headers should use the 'held:' URI defined in lis-discovery, not the reference defined by this document.  This document is describing the LCP, not the dereference protocol.  There is still mention in Section 11.1 of an https: URI.

I remain unconvinced of the need for two URI deref schemes, but I'll take that discussion offline.

Cheers,
Martin

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> 	Title           : HTTP Enabled Location Delivery (HELD)
> 	Author(s)       : M. Barnes, et al.
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-
> 08.txt
> 	Pages           : 48
> 	Date            : 2008-07-10
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> A Layer 7 Location Configuration Protocol (L7 LCP) is described that
> is used for retrieving location information from a server within an
> access network.  The protocol includes options for retrieving
> location information in two forms: by value and by reference.  The
> protocol is an extensible application-layer protocol that is
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