[Geopriv] Minor issue in phrasing in draft-ietf-geopriv-arch-01.txt
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[Geopriv] Minor issue in phrasing in draft-ietf-geopriv-arch-01.txt



One minor wording issue I noticed is the use of "hard-wired" in section 3.1.2 (in the phrase 'effectively "hard-wired."'). Just for clarity, it might be better to use "in effect, statically configured" or a similar phrase, to avoid confusion with other meanings of "wired" and "hard-wired".

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