[Geopriv] Long review of draft-ietf-geopriv-loc-filters-07

["James M. Polk" <jmpolk at cisco.com>]

I have attached my review of draft-ietf-geopriv-loc-filters-07.

It is a PDF of my marked up version.  It has enough comments and 
suggestions that putting this in email would be very difficult - but 
I will if the chairs believe that's best.

Some of the comments are nits, some of the comments were where a 
topic or sentence didn't make sense (perhaps with its placement were 
it was in the paragraph), and some of the comments were technical.  I 
hope they are obvious when anyone reads them.

I can send the MS WORD version with the active track changes to the 
authors if they want that version.

If there are any questions or comments about my review comments, 
please don't hesitate to send me a note.

James

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