Re: [Ianaplan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ianaplan-icg-response-01.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 18 October 2014 04:43 UTC

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I generally support the changes in this version.

I suggest that at the point where the IAOC is defined, it would be
helpful to also mention the IETF Trust. Something like:

The members of the IAOC are also the trustees of the IETF Trust, whose
main purpose is to hold certain intellectual property for the benefit of
the IETF as a whole.

(I realise that there is no further mention of the Trust in the
document, but it seems very likely to come up in subsequent
discussions.)

Regards
   Brian Carpenter