[Icar] icar-experiment-early-review-00 comments

[Pekka Savola <pekkas at netcore.fi>]

a couple of short comments on the  icar consensus doc..

semi-substantial
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5.1  Who requests a review

==> this doesn't specify what happens to the review requests which do not
come from WG chairs/secretaries or ADs.  In particular, if a doc author
wants to get review of his shiny -00 submission nobody else has bothered to
comment.....

editorial
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Quite apart from
       the ICAR process, any member of the IETF community may, of
       course, review a WG document at any time s/he wishes and provide
       that input to the WG.

==> this should maybe be generalized a bit for the case where it isn't a WG
document (but individual submission to an AD).  This cornercase seems to be
missing from a couple of places in the draft..

   o  people who have authored 2 IETF RFCs approved for publication by
      the IESG, which includes non-WG documents submitted directly to
      the IESG, but not documents submitted directly to the RFC editor

==> This should probably be clearer worded like:

   o  people who have authored at least 2 IETF RFCs approved for publication by
      the IESG (which also includes non-WG documents submitted directly to
      the IESG, but not documents submitted directly to the RFC editor)

   o  current WG chairs whose WG has produced 2 RFCs

==> .. at least 2 ... ;-)  -- not sure if this is pedantically required
though..

  It is up to the WG chair(s) / secretary to choose the reviewers who
   review the document. In order to do this, reviewers in the pool must
   be clearly labeled with their area(s) of expertise they feel
   qualified to provide .

==> ... "input on"




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Pekka Savola                 "You each name yourselves king, yet the
Netcore Oy                    kingdom bleeds."
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