Adminrest: section 3.4

[sob at harvard.edu (Scott Bradner)]

draft-ietf-iasa-bcp-01 section 3.4 says

3.4  Relationship of the IAOC to Existing IETF Leadership

   The IAOC is directly accountable to the IETF community for the
   performance of the IASA.  However, the nature of the IAOC's work
   involves treating the IESG and IAB as internal customers.  The IAOC
   and the IAD should not consider their work successful unless the IESG
   and IAB are satisfied with the administrative support that they are
   receiving.

I'd suggest that the last sentence be changed to:
"The IAOC and the IAD should not consider their work successful unless
the IESG and IAB are satisfied with the administrative support that the
IETF is receiving."

Scott

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