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Hi Julian,
FYI Many of your comments were addressed in -14, several of the others (outdated references) etc will be fixed by the RFC editor. I apologize that we did not reply to you original message to let you know what had been done.
OK,
I'll re-check my list then:
Section 1., para. 2:
Discussion of this specification is taking place on the mailing list <http://lists.osafoundation.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-caldav>. [[anchor2: Clarify that this paragraph should be removed upon publication --reschke]]
-> Not fixed.
Will be taken care of by note to RFC editor.
Section 1.2., para. 3:
The XML declarations used in this document do not include namespace information. Thus, implementers MUST NOT use these declarations as the only way to create valid CalDAV properties or to validate CalDAV XML element type. [[anchor5: "...MUST NOT use these declarations as the only way..." is extremly hard to understand; the presence of RFC2119 keywords make things worse in that the reader is confused to believe that a normative statement is being made. As far as I can tell, all this wants to say is that the missing namespace needs to be taken into account. Please clarify. --reschke]] Some of the declarations refer to XML elements defined by WebDAV [I-D.ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis] which use the "DAV:" namespace. Wherever such XML elements appear, they are explicitly prefixed with "DAV:" to avoid confusion.
-> Not fixed.
Section 5.2.4., para. 5:
Description: The CALDAV:supported-calendar-data property is used to specify the media type supported for the calendar object resources contained in a given calendar collection (e.g., iCalendar version 2.0). Any attempt by the client to store calendar object resources with a media type not listed in this property MUST result in an error, with the CALDAV:supported-calendar-data precondition (Section 5.3.2.1) being violated. In the absence of this property the server MUST accept data with the media type "text/calendar" and iCalendar version 2.0, and clients can assume that. [[anchor15: What about other types in this case? --reschke]]
-> Not changed. Does this mean it MAY accept others in this case?
Section 5.3.1., para. 3:
Clients SHOULD use the DAV:displayname property for a human-readable name of the calendar. Clients can either specify the value of the DAV:displayname property in the request body of the MKCALENDAR request, or alternatively issue a PROPPATCH request to change the DAV:displayname property to the appropriate value immediately after issuing the MKCALENDAR request. Clients SHOULD NOT set the DAV: displayname property to be the same as any other calendar collection at the same URI "level". When displaying calendar collections to users, clients SHOULD check the DAV:displayname property and use that value as the name of the calendar. In the event that the DAV: displayname property is empty, the client MAY use the last part of the calendar collection URI as the name, however that path segment may be "opaque" and not represent any meaningful human-readable text. [[anchor17: This seems to profile DAV:displayname as defined by RFC2518bis. Furthermore it's not clear what happens when the client violates the constraint. --reschke]]
-> Not fixed.
Section 5.3.4., para. 4:
In the case where the data stored by a server as a result of a PUT request is not equivalent by octet equality to the submitted calendar object resource, the behavior of the ETag response header is not specified here, with the exception that a strong entity tag MUST NOT be returned in the response. As a result, clients may need to retrieve the modified calendar object resource (and ETag) as a basis for further changes, rather than use the calendar object resource it had sent with the PUT request. [[anchor22: See comments on ietf- discuss mailing list. --reschke]]
-> Not fixed.
Correct.
Section 7.5., para. 1:
Some calendaring REPORTs defined in this document allow partial retrieval of calendar object resources. A CalDAV client MAY specify what information to return in the body of a calendaring REPORT request. [[anchor29: Why does this simple statement require RFC2219 terminology? Please don't over-use it. In particular, please check that all "MAY" requirements really are needed for the purposes outlined in RFC2219. --reschke]]
-> This one was fixed, but I think there are more of these, such as in para 2.
Section 7.8., para. 4:
The request body MUST be a CALDAV:calendar-multiget XML element (see Section 9.9). If the Request-URI is a collection resource, then the DAV:href elements MUST refer to calendar object resources within that collection, and they MAY refer to calendar object resources at any depth within the collection. As a result the "Depth" header MUST be ignored by the server and SHOULD NOT be sent by the client. [[anchor42: Bad idea. Just stick with RFC3253/RFC3744 terminology (invalid depth values are rejected by the server, not ignored). This leaves the possibilily to later define semantics for these values. --reschke]] If the Request-URI refers to a non-collection resource, then there MUST be a single DAV:href element that is equivalent to the Request-URI.
-> Not fixed.
Section 8.4., para. 3:
For calendar sharing and scheduling use cases, one might wish to find the calendar belonging to another user. If the other user has a calendar in the same repository, that calendar can be found by using the principal namespace required by WebDAV ACL support. For other cases, the authors have no universal solution but implementers can consider whether to use vCard [RFC2426] or LDAP [RFC2251] standards together with calendar attributes [RFC2739]. [[anchor55: LDAP reference is outdated. --reschke]]
-> Not fixed.
Will get fixed via note to RFC editor.
Section 8.5.2., para. 1:
CalDAV clients SHOULD support downloading of external attachments referenced by arbitrary URI schemes, by either processing them directly, or by passing the attachment URI to a suitable "helper application" for processing, if such an application exists. CalDAV clients MUST support downloading of external attachments referenced by the "http" URI scheme, and MAY support downloading of external attachments referenced by the "https" URI scheme. An external attachment could be: [[anchor59: Very confusing: MAY, SHOULD and MUST requirements for basically the same thing. In particular, the MAY for "https" is bogus, because the spec just stated that the client SHOULD support arbitrary schemes. --reschke]]
-> Not fixed.
We did not feel this needed to be changed.
Section 9.5., para. 7:
Note: The CALDAV:calendar-data XML element is specified in requests and responses inside the DAV:prop XML element as if it were a WebDAV property. However, the CALDAV:calendar-data XML element is not a WebDAV property and as such it is not returned in PROPFIND responses nor used in PROPPATCH requests. [[anchor62: For this reason, I think a syntax where it can't be confused with a property whould be better. --reschke]]
-> Not fixed, but I didn't expect that :-)
-- Cyrus Daboo
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