Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-lemonade-deployments (Deployment Considerations for lemonade-compliant Mobile Email) to BCP

[Randall Gellens <randy at qualcomm.com>]

At 6:32 PM +0100 1/16/07, Frank Ellermann wrote:

>  How about s/HTTP/HTTP or better HTTPS/ somewhere in 4 ?

I don't think HTTPS is a sufficiently different protocol from HTTP to 
warrant making any distinction for the purposes of Section 4.

>  s/exist a large number/exists a large number/ in 8 (?)

I think you're right, but it sounds funny to my ear, so I'd prefer 
"there are a large number".

>  Please expand the first use of DMZ - I didn't know the
>  abbreviation - but of course Google found it for me ;-)

How about "Placing servers inside one or more DMZs (demilitarized 
zones, also called perimeter networks) can protect the rest of the 
network"?

>  FWIW, I like that I-D.

Thanks.

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