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for this and certainly a critical mass to move forward.Some comments in the charter below. This document clearly needs some more work. As a overall comment, I think it is premature to discuss ALTO "servers" and would keep the charter focused on describing the ALTO "service." I do not see consensus at this moment as to a central service solution versus a distributed
solution. Regards Marshall On Oct 6, 2008, at 4:35 PM, IESG Secretary wrote:
A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Applications Area. The IESG has not made any determination as yet. The following draft charter was submitted, and is provided for informational purposes only. Pleasesend your comments to the IESG mailing list (iesg at ietf.org) by Monday, October 13, 2008. Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (alto) ============================================= Last Modified: 2008-09-29 Current Status: Proposed Working Group Chair(s): TBD Applications Area Director(s): Lisa Dusseault (lisa at osafoundation.org) Chris Newman (Chris.Newman at sun.com) Applications Area Advisor: Lisa Dusseault (lisa at osafoundation.org) Mailing List: General Discussion: p2pi at ietf.org To Subscribe: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2pi Archive: http://www.ietf.org/pipermail/p2pi/ Description of Working Group: A significant part of the Internet traffic today is generated by peer-to-peer (P2P) applications used for file sharing, real-time communications, and live media streaming. P2P applications exchange large amounts of data, often uploading as much as downloading. In contrast to client/server architectures, P2P applications often have a selection of peers and must choose.
s/choose/choose the best peer or peers to exchange data with/
One of the advantages of P2P systems comes from redundancy in resource availability. This requires choosing among download locations, yet applications have at best incomplete information about the topology of the network. Applications can sometimes make empirical measurements of link performance, but even when this is an option it takes time. The application cannot always start out with an optimal arrangement of peers, thus causing at least temporary reduced performance and excessive cross-domain traffic. Providing more information for use in peer selection can improve P2P performance and lower ISP costs. The Working Group will design and specify an Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) service that will provide applications with information to perform better-than-random initial peer selection. ALTO services may take different approaches at balancing factors including maximum bandwidth, minimum cross-domain traffic, lowest cost to the user, etc. The WG will consider the needs of BitTorrent, tracker-less P2P, and other applications, such as content delivery networks (CDN) and mirror selection. The WG will focus on the following items: - A "problem statement" document providing a description of the problem and a common terminology. - A requirements document. This document will list requirements for the ALTO service, identifying, for example, what kind of information P2P applications will need for optimizing their choices. - A request/response protocol for querying the ALTO service to obtain information useful for peer selection, and a format for requests and responses. The WG does not require intermediaries between the ALTO
This is strange wording, as WG themselves are not protocols.More fundamentally, is this a requirement ? If so, it seems premature before a requirements draft is adopted. Saying "The ALTO server" here also seems limiting - is there a solution draft describing a server ? Others have already commented on central servers versus a distributed system, and to
me the charter is not the place to make such decisions. I would remove this sentence entirely.
server and the peer querying it. If the requirements analysis identifiesthe need to allow clients to delegate third-parties to query the ALTOservice on their behalf, the WG will ensure that the protocol provides amechanism to assert the consent of the delegating client.- A document defining core request and response formats and semantics to communicate network preferences to applications. Since ALTO services may be run by entities with different level of knowledge about the underlying network, such preferences may have different representations. Initially the WG will consider: IP ranges to prefer and to avoid, ranked lists of the peers requested by the client, information about topological proximity and approximate geographic locations. Other usages will be considered as extensions to the charter once the work for the initial services has beencompleted.- In order to query the ALTO server, clients must first know one or more
s/server/service/ s/know/find/
ALTO servers that might provide useful information. The WG will look at service discovery mechanisms that are in use, or defined elsewhere (e.g. based on DNS SRV records or DHCP options). If such discovery mechanisms can be reused, the WG will produce a document to specify how they may beadopted for locating such servers. However, a new, general-purpose service discovery mechanism is not in scope. When the WG considers standardizing information that the ALTO server
s/server/service/
could provide, the following criteria are important to ensure real feasibility. - Can the ALTO service technically provide that information?
I think that what is meant here is "Can the ALTO service realistically discover that information?"
- Is the ALTO service willing to obtain and divulge that information?
Do computers have free will ?More seriously, it seems very odd to assume that a P2P service will not do something that the owners of
the peers want it to do. In my opinion that drives P2P adoption much more than the efficiencies of bandwidth sharing.
- Is it information that a client will find useful? - Can a client get that information without excessive privacy concerns (e.g. by sending large lists of peers)? - Is it information that a client cannot find easily some other way? After these criteria are met, the generality of the data will be
What is meant by "the generality of the data" ?
considered for prioritizing standardization work, for example the number of operators and clients that are likely to be able to provide or use that particular data. In any case, this WG will not propose standards on how congestion is signaled, remediated, or avoided, and
Does this mean that congestion is not an issue to consider ?If the closest peer to me was totally congested and had no available bandwidth, isn't that something that
I would want to know ?
will not deal with information representing instantaneous network state.
What is meant by "information representing instantaneous network state" ? Isn't this a protocol to share information about the state of the network ? Or is this an attempt to separate network topology from network performance ? But should network performance
also be an issue ?
Such issues belong to other IETF areas and will be treated accordingly bythe specific area. This WG will focus solely on the communication protocol between
Not according to the previous paragraphs. Service discovery is not part of
this communication protocol, Load balancing is not part of this, etc. I would suggest changing "solely" to "primarily"
applications and ALTO servers. Note that ALTO services may be useful in client-server environments as well as P2P environments, although P2P environments are the first focus. If, in the future, the IETF considers changes to other protocols for actually implementing ALTOservers (e.g. application-layer protocols for Internet coordinate systems,
What is an Internet coordinate system ?
routing protocol extensions for ISP-based solutions), such work will be done in strict coordination with the appropriate WGs. Issues related to the content exchanged in P2P systems are also
s/also//
excluded from the WG's scope, as is the issue dealing with enforcing
s/is the issue/are issues/
the legality of the content.
s/the legality of the content/copyrights/
Goals and Milestones (very tentative dates): Apr 2009: Working Group Last Call for problem statement Jun 2009: Submit problem statement to IESG as Informational Aug 2009: Working Group Last Call for requirements document Oct 2009: Submit requirements document to IESG as Informational Jan 2010: Working Group Last Call for request/response protocol Jan 2010: Working Group Last Call for usage document for communicating network preferences Mar 2010: Submit request/response protocol to IESG as Proposed Standard Mar 2010: Submit usage document to IESG as Proposed Standard May 2010: Working Group Last Call of discovery mechanism Jul 2010: Submit discovery mechanism to IESG as Proposed Standard Aug 2010: Dissolve or re-charter Initial Drafts for Consideration - draft-marocco-alto-problem-statement-02 -- Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Problem Statement - draft-kiesel-alto-reqs-00 -- Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Requirements
Regards Marshall
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