Re: [Trustees] Last Call for Comments: Proposed work-around to thePre-5378 Problem

[Marshall Eubanks <tme at multicasttech.com>]

Dear Cullen;

On Feb 10, 2009, at 1:10 PM, Cullen Jennings wrote:

> I've gotten a bit lost on all the changes. Would it be possible to  
> send to the list a single email that summarizes the current proposed  
> changes to the document published on the web sight? or just a new  
> copy of the document?

See

Draft Legal Provisions Relating to IETF Documents after Community Last  
Call (2009-02-09)

in

http://trustee.ietf.org/policyandprocedures.html

Both redlined and a clean copy are provided, in both pdf and MS word  
for each.

Regards
Marshall


> On Feb 9, 2009, at 5:41 PM, Contreras, Jorge wrote:
>
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Thomas Narten [mailto:narten at us.ibm.com]
> > > Sent: Monday, February 09, 2009 6:23 PM
> > > To: Marshall Eubanks
> > > Cc: Contreras, Jorge; Trustees; SM; ietf at ietf.org
> > > Subject: Re: [Trustees] Last Call for Comments: Proposed
> > > work-around to thePre-5378 Problem
> > >
> > > > > NEW PROPOSED
> > > > >
> > > > > c. Derivative Works and Publication Limitations.  If a
> > > Contributor
> > > > >    desires to limit the right to make modifications
> > > and derivative
> > >
> > > > s/desires/needs/
> > >
> > > > I don't think that "desires" is appropriate here - as John pointed
> > > > out, the contributor has no discretion here, except for their
> > > > judgement as to whether rights are available.
> > >
> > > Actually, in this case, it is the submitters choice, since we are
> > > talking about case (i) or (ii) (and not (iii) which has been the
> > > challenging case).  And "desires" is the wording that has been used
> > > here for a while.
> > >
> > > But that said, a more neutral term is fine by me, since the
> > > motivations for needing to select this may vary.
> > >
> > > How about "chooses"?
> > >
> > > Thomas
> >
> > "chooses" is fine with me
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