Re: [Gen-art] Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)

[Ben Campbell <ben at nostrum.com>]

On Oct 2, 2009, at 3:25 PM, Ahmad Muhanna wrote:

> Thank you Ben for reviewing and taking the time to go through the
> document once more!
> Agreed; Sorry, I missed that one.
>
> I will make sure it is included in the next revision. I am sure you  
> are
> okay not to spin another revision unless this is the only outstanding
> comment.

Yes, no problem. That one could be done as an editor note (or not at  
all, really--it's pretty minor.)

> Thanks again!
>
> Regards,
> Ahmad
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben at nostrum.com]
> > Sent: Friday, October 02, 2009 2:47 PM
> > To: Muhanna, Ahmad (RICH1:2H10)
> > Cc: Khalil, Mohamed (RICH2:2S20); sgundave at cisco.com;
> > kchowdhury at starentnetworks.com; pyegani at juniper.net; General
> > Area Review Team; IETF-Discussion list; Jari Arkko;
> > marcelo at it.uc3m.es; Julien Laganier
> > Subject: Followup on Gen-ART review of
> > draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and
> > Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)
> >
> > Hi,
> >
> > This is a followup of my Gen-ART review of
> > draft-ietf-mext-binding- revocation, updated based on
> > revision 13 of that draft.
> >
> > This revision addresses all of my substantive issues, and
> > most of the editorial issues. I had one outstanding minor
> > editorial comment where the author proposed a specific
> > change, but that change did not make it into revision 13 as
> > far as I can tell:
> >
> > > > -- Section 11, (InitMINDelayBRIs) (I think I commented on 
> > this, but
> > > > can't find the resolution)
> > > >
> > > > Did you intend for the _default_ to be a range (between .5 and 1
> > > > sec), or did you mean to say the default was 1 second, and it must
> > > > not be configured to less than .5 seconds? I suspect the
> > latter, but
> > > > it's not clear from the text.
> > >
> > > [Ahmad]
> > > Sure, will fix this as follows:
> > >
> > >  Initial Minimum Delay Between BRI messages (InitMINDelayBRIs)
> > >
> > >     This variable specifies the initial delay timeout in seconds
> > >     before the revoking mobility entity retransmits a BRI message.
> > >     The default is 1 second but not to be configured less than 0.5
> > > seconds.
> >
> > Revision 13 still appears to have the old text.
> >
> >
> > Thanks!
> >
> > Ben.
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