Re: request for feedback: change to the ID boilerplate

[Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman at vpnc.org>]

At 11:28 AM +0200 10/27/09, Lars Eggert wrote:
>>  Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
>>  Task Force (IETF).  Note that other groups may also distribute
>>  working documents as Internet-Drafts.  The list of current
>>  Internet-Drafts is at http://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/.
>>

I think we are (correctly) getting tripped up on "distribute". Other groups don't distribute Internet Drafts: they write them and let the IETF distribute them. Also, we don't know if "most" will be true forever, regardless of what we hope.

Proposed change:

  Many Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
  Task Force (IETF); other groups and individuals create Internet-Drafts
  that are included in the repository that is maintained by the IETF.
  That repository is available at <some URL>.

--Paul Hoffman, Director
--VPN Consortium