RE: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevstifeyev-tn3270-uri-12
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Subject: RE: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevstifeyev-tn3270-uri-12
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From: "Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich)" <mehmet.ersue@nsn.com>
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> > The reviewer furthermore states, following the rules in > > RFC4395 the document should provide concrete contact information for the > > editor instead of an anonymous email address only. > That would be corrected so that the author will be IETF and contact - IESG. I am not really sure whether this is appropriate. Why are you keen of keeping it more or less anonymous? Cheers, Mehmet > -----Original Message----- > From: ext Mykyta Yevstifeyev [mailto:evnikita2@gmail.com] > Sent: Thursday, January 13, 2011 1:58 AM > To: Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich); IETF Discussion > Subject: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevstifeyev-tn3270- > uri-12 > > 12.01.2011 14:19, Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich) wrote: > > -----Original Message----- > > From: ops-dir-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:ops-dir-bounces@ietf.org] On > > Behalf Of ext Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich) > > Sent: Wednesday, January 12, 2011 1:07 PM > > To: ops-dir@ietf.org > > Cc: draft-yevstifeyev-tn3270-uri-authors@tools.ietf.org > > Subject: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevstifeyev-tn3270-uri-12 > > > > I reviewed draft-yevstifeyev-tn3270-uri-12 for its operational > impacts.. > > > > Summary: > > The document gives a specification of syntax, semantics and use of > > 'tn3270' URI scheme. > > > > Obviously this is an individual submission without any document > write-up > > and supporting AD. > Why without? Peter Saint-Andre is sponsoring AD. > > I would like to read a document write-up with the regular template > even > > if it is written by the author. > > > > The main purpose of the document, namely to update the IANA > registration > > of tn3270 URI scheme using the given registration template, should be > > added to the Introduction section. In general I would suggest to > include > > in the Introduction section the purpose of the action and more > > importantly why existing IANA registrations are not sufficient and > why > > the publication of this RFC is needed. > Agreed. I'll add that as soon as possible. > > Obviously the GEN-Area reviewer (Tom Petch) has an opposite opinion > and > > does not see this IANA registration in the interest of IETF (see > > > https://www.ietf.org/ibin/c5i?mid=6&rid=49&gid=0&k1=933&k2=55119&tid=12 > 9 > > 4831574). The reviewer furthermore states, following the rules in > > RFC4395 the document should provide concrete contact information for > the > > editor instead of an anonymous email address only. > That would be corrected so that the author will be IETF and contact - > IESG. > > I don't see any additional operation impact other than above. > > > > Other issues: > > > > - The used language needs some polishing. > > > > - Following are draft nits suggesting correction: > > > > == The copyright year in the IETF Trust and authors Copyright Line > does > > not > > match the current year > > > > -> Use new template or: s/2010/2011/ > Will be corrected. > > -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 1738 > > (Obsoleted by RFC 4248, RFC 4266) > > > > -> Use correct reference or clarify. > Obsolete Informational references are allowed. I don't see a problem > here. > > Mykyta > > > > Mehmet > > > > _______________________________________________ > > OPS-DIR mailing list > > OPS-DIR@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ops-dir > >
- Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevstifeye… Mykyta Yevstifeyev
- Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevsti… Mykyta Yevstifeyev
- RE: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevsti… Worley, Dale R (Dale)
- Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevsti… Mykyta Yevstifeyev
- RE: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevsti… Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich)
- RE: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevsti… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR Review of draft-yevsti… Joel M. Halpern
- author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS-DIR… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… Doug Ewell
- Re: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… Doug Ewell
- Re: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… t.petch
- Re: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… Phillip Hallam-Baker
- Re: author's address Mykyta Yevstifeyev
- Re: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… Marshall Eubanks
- RE: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… Worley, Dale R (Dale)
- Re: author's address Julian Reschke
- Re: author's address (was: Re: Fwd: [OPS-DIR] OPS… Sandy Ginoza