RE: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-04.txt> (Update to RFC 3777 to Clarify Nominating Committee Eligibility of IETF Leadership) to Best Current Practice
"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Thu, 27 September 2012 19:07 UTC
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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Subject: RE: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-04.txt> (Update to RFC 3777 to Clarify Nominating Committee Eligibility of IETF Leadership) to Best Current Practice
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I have participated in the discussions leading to this version of the document, and support its publication as an RFC. However, I have two small editorial proposals and two typos that I would like to see polished. Thanks, Adrian --- Section 1 RFC 3777 specifies that "sitting members" of the IAB and IESG "may not volunteer to serve on the nominating committee". Since that document was written the IETF Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC) was formed, and that body is not covered by RFC 3777. The point here is not just the formation of the IAOC, it is the fact that NomCom appoints people to the IAOC that is important. Can you add this fact with the appropriate reference to the instructions to NomCom for selecting IAOC members. --- Section 2 There is a punctuation and ambiguity issue :-( 1. As punctuated looks like the exclusion is people who are simultaneously ISOC trustees and on the IAB, IESG, and IAOC! 2. It is not clear what bodies people might be serving in ex-officio positions. Sometimes more is less. Suggest... OLD 15. Members of the Internet Society Board of Trustees and sitting members of the IAB, the IESG, and the IAOC, including members in ex- officio positions, may not volunteer to serve as voting members of the nominating committee. Liaisons to these bodies from other bodies or organizations are not excluded by this rule. NEW 15. Any person who serves on any of the Internet Society Board of Trustees, the IAB, the IESG, or the IAOC, including those who serve on these bodies in ex-officio positions, may not volunteer to serve as voting members of the nominating committee. Liaisons to these bodies from other bodies or organizations are not excluded by this rule. END --- Section 1 That said, it would be bad to eliminate people who have the experience necessary to understand of the IETF process: s/of the/the/ --- Section 1 s/fulfill the roles/fill the roles/ > -----Original Message----- > From: ietf-announce-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:ietf-announce- > bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of The IESG > Sent: 27 September 2012 16:05 > To: IETF-Announce > Subject: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-04.txt> (Update to RFC 3777 to > Clarify Nominating Committee Eligibility of IETF Leadership) to Best Current > Practice > > > The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider > the following document: > - 'Update to RFC 3777 to Clarify Nominating Committee Eligibility of IETF > Leadership' > <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-04.txt> as Best Current Practice
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Russ Housley
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Dave Crocker
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Russ Housley
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Dave Crocker
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Ted Hardie
- RE: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Adrian Farrel
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Barry Leiba
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… Barry Leiba
- Re: Last Call: <draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-0… S Moonesamy