Re: Suggested changes to draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-04

Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net> Sun, 15 December 2013 20:55 UTC

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On 12/15/2013 12:38 PM, S Moonesamy wrote:
> Hello,
>
> There was a discussion with the (sponsoring) Area Director and document
> shepherd about the Introduction section of
> draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-04 [1].  The following change is
> suggested:
>
>      The work of the IETF relies on cooperation among a diverse range of
>      people, ideas, and communication styles.  The IETF strives, through
>      the guidelines for conduct, to create and maintain an environment
>      in which every person is treated with dignity, decency, and respect.
>      People who participate in the IETF are expected to behave in a
>      professional manner as we work together to develop interoperable
>      technologies for the Internet.  All IETF participants aim to abide by
>      these guidelines as we build consensus in person and through email
>      discussions.  If conflicts arise they are resolved according to the
>      procedures outlined in RFC 2026 [RFC2026].

Nice.

Small suggestion is to add (rough), so that a casual reader won't miss 
that our version of consensus does not mean unanimity.

d/


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Dave Crocker
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