Re: [EAI] Status of draft-ietf-eai-downgraded-display-02.txt

[Barry Leiba <barryleiba.mailing.lists at gmail.com>]

> After looking at Pasi's DISCUSS comment on this, I re-read sections 3
> and 4, and I think they're both quite  difficult, and not ready for
> publication.  I can't understand the point of section 3 at all, in
> fact -- it seems to tell me about something I might do, and then tells
> me not to do it.  If someone will try explaining the real point, here,
> I'll take a stab at re-writing it.
>
> I'm in the process of re-writing section 4, and I'll post the result
> here when I'm done, for the WG to review and see if it works.

I've gotten stuck on the re-write of section 4, as well -- I can't
figure out what I'm supposed to do after step 4, and step 6, in
particular, doesn't make sense to me.

I presume that, since the working group sent this up to the IESG, some
others in the WG understand the process.  Will someone who does please
get in touch with me so we can work on re-wording?  I'm happy to do
the writing, but I need consultation on the procedure that's being
defined.

Barry