I am not entirely sure what the line "Significant new work items will
be brought for approval to the IESG" means. I think that should
either be better explained or removed. The TSVWG has the following
wording, which I prefer:
Additional work [...] in TSVWG must satisfy four
conditions: (1) WG consensus on the suitability and projected quality
of the proposed work item. (2) A core group of WG participants with
sufficient energy and expertise to advance the work item according to
the proposed schedule. (3) Commitment from the WG as a whole to
provide sufficient and timely review of the proposed work item. (4)
Agreement by the ADs, who, depending on the scope of the proposed
work item, may decide that an IESG review is needed first.