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[ippm] Publication request: draft-ietf-ippm-multimetrics-11.txt as Proposed Standard
The IPPM Working Group would like to request "IP Performance Metrics
(IPPM) for spatial and multicast", draft-ietf-ippm-multimetrics-11.txt,
as a Proposed Standard.
The document shepherd writeup is attached.
--Matt and Henk
Document shepherd writeup for draft-ietf-ippm-multimetrics-11.txt, as required
by rfc4858, and specified in the 17-Sep-2008 version of <http://www.ietf.org/IESG/content/Doc-Writeup.html>.
(1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the
Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the
document and, in particular, does he or she believe this
version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication?
The document shepherd is Matt Zekauskas <matt at internet2.edu>
The document shepherd has personally reviewed this document and
believes this version is read for forwarding to the IESG for
publication.
(1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members
and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have
any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that
have been performed?
I believe the document has received sufficient review from key WG
members, especially in the rev before and the two revs after WGLC. I
don't believe there are key non-WG members that need to review the
document. I have no concerns about the depth or breadth of reviews
for this document.
(1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document
needs more review from a particular or broader perspective,
e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with
AAA, internationalization or XML?
no.
(1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or
issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director
and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he
or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or
has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any
event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated
that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those
concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document
been filed? If so, please include a reference to the
disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on
this issue.
I think the AD should be aware of one potential issue. In some of the
summary statistics, this document uses means of finite delays.
This has been of some past controversy, and I believe it has been
settled for this document; the document itself has a discussion on
packet loss in section 8.1.
(My view of) the issue is this: RFC 2679 (and the framework RFC 2330)
treat lost packets as having infinite delay. RFC 2679 specifically
avoided using means of received packet delays, and only used order
statistics. If you only want to report one value, knowing that the
50th percentile of delay is infinite tells you the path is bad.
Knowing only that the mean is 5mS is misleading if packet loss is 80%.
(Furthermore, means imply a normal distribution, and Internet
distributions tend to be far from normal.) However, the industry
still uses means of finite delay, and using means can be useful in
some situations, and if the mean is always reported (or at least
considered) with loss and perhaps delay histograms, you can tell when
it is meaningless. [Al Morton has an exposition in Section 4 of his
(so far personal) draft draft-morton-ippm-reporting-metrics-06.txt.]
This document was developed with an understanding of the limitations
of the mean, and it was chosen for composition. There are a couple other
documents in the pipeline that also have this issue. However, I can
believe that it might get raised again in IETF last call, although it
was not in WGLC.
I know of no IPR disclosures related to this document.
(1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it
represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with
others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and
agree with it?
I think WG consensus behind this document is fairly strong at this point,
although I think there has been more silence on this document than
some of the other recent ones.
(1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme
discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in
separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It
should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is
entered into the ID Tracker.)
no.
(1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the
document satisfies all ID nits? (See
http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and
http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are
not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document
met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB
Doctor, media type and URI type reviews?
Yes. There are no other area formal reviews needed.
(1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and
informative? Are there normative references to documents that
are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear
state? If such normative references exist, what is the
strategy for their completion? Are there normative references
that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If
so, list these downward references to support the Area
Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967].
References are split and appropriate. There are no downward refs, nor
normative refs to wait for. There is one non-normative work-in-progress
reference (to Spatial Composition of Metrics) that has a new revision number,
but the reference is still appropriate and would be referenced as a work
in progress rather than specific version number.
(1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA
consideration section exists and is consistent with the body
of the document? If the document specifies protocol
extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA
registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If
the document creates a new registry, does it define the
proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation
procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a
reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the
document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd
conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG
can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation?
The IANA consideration section exists, and is consistent with the
other documents from IPPM and RFC 4148, which describes the IPPM
Metrics Registry.
(1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the
document that are written in a formal language, such as XML
code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in
an automated checker?
The only section where this could apply is the IANA Considerations
section, where IANA is asked to register the metrics in the IPPM
Metrics Registry. The entries given are proper form with respect
to RFC 4148, which defined the registry.
(1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document
Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document
Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the
"Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval
announcement contains the following sections:
Technical Summary
The IETF has standardized IP Performance Metrics (IPPM) for measuring
end-to-end performance between two points. This memo defines two new
categories of metrics that extend the coverage to multiple
measurement points. It defines spatial metrics for measuring the
performance of segments of a source to destination path, and metrics
for measuring the performance between a source and many destinations
in multiparty communications (e.g., a multicast tree).
The scope of this memo is limited to metrics using a single source
packet or stream, and observations of corresponding packets along the
path (spatial), at one or more destinations (one-to-group), or both.
Note that all the metrics defined herein are based on observations of
packets dedicated to testing, a process that is called active
measurement. Passive measurement (for example, a spatial metric
based on the observation of user traffic) is beyond the scope of this
memo.
Working Group Summary
The working group input has improved this document through its
revisions, and the document itself has been uncontroversial.
Document Quality
I know of no current implementations that claim to implement this metric.
However, other implementers in the group have read the draft.