Comment on section 2.3 of draft-ietf-ipr-rules-update-01

[Simon Josefsson <jas at extundo.com>]

Hi all.

The new text in section 2.3 of -01 is a good attempt to address the
reprint right, although when comparing it to the RFC 2026 text, I note
that one aspect in 2026:

         The limited permissions granted above are perpetual and will
         not be revoked by the Internet Society or its successors or
         assigns.

is not reflected in the new text.  How about changing:

   (F) to permit third parties to copy, publish, display and
       distribute the Contribution without modification (except for
       translation into languages other than English) as part of a
       full, unmodified RFC (which may be translated into the same
       language as such Contribution), for any purpose, whether or not
       within the IETF Standards Process.
...
   Permission is granted to translate this document or portions of
   this document into languages other than English. Permission is also
   hereby granted to copy, publish, display and distribute this
   document or portions of this document, or their translations,
   without additional modification.

into (my modifications underlined):

   (F) to grant third parties the perpetual right to copy, publish,
          ---------------------------------
       display and distribute the Contribution without modification
       (except for translation into languages other than English) as
       part of a full, unmodified RFC (which may be translated into
       the same language as such Contribution), for any purpose,
       whether or not within the IETF Standards Process.
...
   Permission is granted to translate this document or portions of
   this document into languages other than English. Permission is also
   hereby granted to copy, publish, display and distribute this
   document or portions of this document, or their translations,
   without additional modification.  These permissions are perpetual
                                     -------------------------------
   and will not be revoked by the Internet Society or its successors
   -----------------------------------------------------------------
   or assigns.
   -----------

Of course, I believe we should grant more rights to third parties, but
my proposal deal with that.  I am trying to improve Scott's document
here, so we won't have to spend time on this relatively minor issue at
the meeting.

Thanks,
Simon

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