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End of Last Call on <draft-ietf-l3vpn-generic-reqts-03.txt>



This ends the last call on  <draft-ietf-l3vpn-generic-reqts-03.txt>.

Ross

At 12:26 PM 2/16/2004 -0500, Ross Callon wrote:
>This message begins working group last call on 
><draft-ietf-l3vpn-generic-reqts-03.txt>.
>
>Note that this document already passed working group last call a 
>while ago. However, the document has since been updated based 
>on IESG comments. The last call will therefore be limited to the 
>changes which have been made, and is abbreviated in time frame.
>The last call will end on Wednesday, February 25. 
>
>The changes which have been made include:
>
>- Explanation of 3 scenarios for the deployment of VPNs. (see 
>section 1.2). In those cases where requirements vary between 
>scenarios, stating how. 
>
>- Substantial increase in the scaling requirements presented in
>section 5.1.2. 
>
>- Editorial changes (typos corrected, extra spaces removed, "VPN"
>in the title expanded to "Virtual Private Networks"). 
>
>- Some text clarification. 
>
>- Capitalization of keywords such as "MUST" and "SHOULD". 
>
>- Adding reference to Security Framework document and general 
>cleaning up of references, along with mentioning draft names in 
>addition to titles. 
>
>Ross
>