Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-l3vpn-ppvpn-mcast-reqts-00.txt

[Len Nieman <lwnieman at bellsouth.net>]

In addition to Ron's comments, I would suggest changing the
fourth paragraph under '5.1.7. Extranet':

"For instance, an enterprise using a multicast-enabled VPN should
be able to receive multicast streams sent by a source in another
VPN, and should also be able to be a source for a multicast
stream towards another VPN."

To the stronger and more direct form:

'For instance, an enterprise using a multicast-enabled VPN should
have the ability to receive a multicast stream from, or originate
a multicast stream towards, another VPN.'

Len Nieman
(Bellsouth's my ISP,
not my employer)