[Ltru] Update ltru-initial-05 (was RE: Draft-14 ready...)

["Scott Hollenbeck" <sah at 428cobrajet.net>]

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Addison Phillips [mailto:addison.phillips at quest.com] 
> Sent: Friday, October 14, 2005 4:56 PM
> To: Addison Phillips; Randy Presuhn; Scott Hollenbeck; ltru at ietf.org
> Subject: Draft-14 ready...
> 
> All:
> 
> Draft-14 is posted in all three formats on the inter-locale site:
> 
> http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-ietf-ltru-registry-14.xml
> http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-ietf-ltru-registry-14.html
> http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-ietf-ltru-registry-14.txt
> 
> IDnits ran clean.
> ABNF checker ran clean.
> 
> A diff is posted here:
> 
> http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-registry-13-14-diff.html
> 
> The list of changes (edits performed by me) incorporated into 
> draft 14 is:
> 
> 1. Updated XML2RFC tool to version 1.30. This caused every 
> header number to pick up a trailing dot (i.e. "2.1.1." 
> instead of "2.1.1"). It also caused the artwork titles to be 
> left aligned instead of centered and the authors addressed to 
> be moved to the bottom just before the IPR statement.
> 
> 2. Changed, per Kent's comment, "then" to "than" in Section 5.1.
> 
> 3. Changed, per Elwyn's comment, the title of Figure 2 
> (Section 3.1) from "record-jar ABNF" to "registry format ABNF"
> 
> 4. Changed the reference from RFC 2234bis to RFC 4234.

All reasonable.

Related topic, other document: what do you all think about Russ Housley's
comment?:

"Russ Housley:
Comment:
[2005-10-12] 
  In section 3 of draft-ietf-ltru-initial-05, it might be useful for the
  document to include the URL of the IANA registry.  It seems to me that
  anyone interested in this document will want to locate the IANA
  registry too."

-Scott-


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