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Re: [Ltru] RE: Update ltru-initial-05 (was RE: Draft-14 ready...)



+1

Addison Phillips wrote:

I'd support including it. The comment makes sense to me.

Addison

Addison P. Phillips
Globalization Architect, Quest Software
Chair, W3C Internationalization Core Working Group

Internationalization is not a feature.
It is an architecture.
-----Original Message-----
From: Scott Hollenbeck [mailto:sah at 428cobrajet.net]
Sent: Friday, October 14, 2005 3:23 PM
To: Addison Phillips; 'Randy Presuhn'; ltru at ietf.org
Subject: Update ltru-initial-05 (was RE: Draft-14 ready...)

-----Original Message-----
From: Addison Phillips [mailto:addison.phillips at quest.com]
Sent: Friday, October 14, 2005 4:56 PM
To: Addison Phillips; Randy Presuhn; Scott Hollenbeck; ltru at ietf.org
Subject: Draft-14 ready...

All:

Draft-14 is posted in all three formats on the inter-locale site:

http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-ietf-ltru-registry-14.xml
http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-ietf-ltru-registry-14.html
http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-ietf-ltru-registry-14.txt

IDnits ran clean.
ABNF checker ran clean.

A diff is posted here:

http://www.inter-locale.com/ID/draft-registry-13-14-diff.html

The list of changes (edits performed by me) incorporated into
draft 14 is:

1. Updated XML2RFC tool to version 1.30. This caused every
header number to pick up a trailing dot (i.e. "2.1.1."
instead of "2.1.1"). It also caused the artwork titles to be
left aligned instead of centered and the authors addressed to
be moved to the bottom just before the IPR statement.

2. Changed, per Kent's comment, "then" to "than" in Section 5.1.

3. Changed, per Elwyn's comment, the title of Figure 2
(Section 3.1) from "record-jar ABNF" to "registry format ABNF"

4. Changed the reference from RFC 2234bis to RFC 4234.
All reasonable.

Related topic, other document: what do you all think about Russ Housley's
comment?:

"Russ Housley:
Comment:
[2005-10-12]
 In section 3 of draft-ietf-ltru-initial-05, it might be useful for the
 document to include the URL of the IANA registry.  It seems to me that
 anyone interested in this document will want to locate the IANA
 registry too."

-Scott-


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