> > Just a couple of editorial comments: > > 1. I felt like sections 4.1.1 and 4.1.2 ought to be in reverse > order. (editor hat OFF) The order is somewhat arbitrary. > > 2. I'm cringing at the text in section 4.2 " a tag such as <meta > http-equiv="Content-Language" value="de" />" since it will probably > encourage people to think that this is how to declare language in > HTML, whereas it is currently not widely interoperable and confuses > people wrt attributes in html tag. Why not change the example to > say " For example, in the same HTML document described in the > preceding bullet, sending an HTTP header containing Content- > Language: de might be a way to indicate..." <meta> is one way to indicate the intended audience. Nonetheless, I like your version better, since there is a lively discussion about what <meta> means or should mean and cetera. (editor hat ON) Unless anyone objects, I will update the editor's copy to include Richard's version of the text for 4.2. Addison _______________________________________________ Ltru mailing list Ltru at ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ltru
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