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Re: [Ltru] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ltru-4646bis-17.txt



At 02:55 08/10/15, Phillips, Addison wrote:
>> 
>> I also have to say that "Deprecated's" feels really ugly.
>> What about changing this to:
>> 
>> The field-body of a Deprecated field contains the date...
>> 
>
>(editor hat ON)
>
>I didn't make this change because EVERY field uses the same form.
>
>I can change it, but it would be purely editorial.

I strongly suggest that you do that, for every field.
The main reason is that this is something that the RFC
editor will probably pick up, and it's easier for us
to fix it now than to fix what they might mess up
(in German, there is the verb "verschlimmbessern",
meaning trying to make it better but making it worse;
that would apply here, but I don't know the English
equivalent).

Regards,   Martin.



#-#-#  Martin J. Du"rst, Assoc. Professor, Aoyama Gakuin University
#-#-#  http://www.sw.it.aoyama.ac.jp       mailto:duerst at it.aoyama.ac.jp     

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