[Ltru] Issue #34 (AD comment #1) - who scrutinizes primary subtags refected by ISO 639/RA-JAC?

["Randy Presuhn" <randy_presuhn at mindspring.com>]

Hi -

> From: "Alexey Melnikov" <alexey.melnikov at isode.com>
> To: "LTRU Working Group" <ltru at ietf.org>
> Sent: Saturday, April 11, 2009 1:08 AM
> Subject: [Ltru] AD review of draft-ietf-ltru-4646bis-21bis.txt
...
> 1).
> 
> > 2.2.1.  Primary Language Subtag
> 
>   [...]
> 
> >    5.  Any language subtags of 5 to 8 characters in length in the IANA
> 
>   [...]
> 
> >        At the time this document was created, there were no examples of
> >        this kind of subtag and future registrations of this type are
> >        discouraged: primary languages are strongly RECOMMENDED for
> >        registration with ISO 639, and proposals rejected by ISO 639/
> >        RA-JAC will be closely scrutinized before they are registered
> >        with IANA.
> 
> [Unclear text] Scrutinized by whom? At this point in the document it is 
> not clear who is going to perform the action.
> I think you meant that this would be done by the designated registry 
> reviewer, so I suggest adding a forward reference here.
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Ok with me.  Proposed text:
replace "scrutinized" with "scrutinized by the Language Subtag Reviewer
(see 3.2)"

Randy