From: ltru-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:ltru-bounces at ietf.org] On Behalf Of "Martin J. Dürst"
>> Nit-pick: Unicode (and ISO/IEC 10646) uses tuple syntax when denoting
>> character sequences. So:
>>
>> lines containing only the sequence "%%" (<U+0025, U+0025>).
>> ...
>> The sequence '..' (<U+002E, U+002E>) in a field-body denotes a range of
>>
>>> other subtags in a tag by a hyphen ("-", [Unicode, p. 1077] U+002D).
> I'm fine with adding the comma. I don't think the IETF uses '<' and '>',
> so I'd prefer to leave them out.
I'm OK with the comma; I agree that this is IETF, not Unicode, so we should adopt IETF conventions.
>> Still nit-picking: I'm not too keen on including a page number. This
>> is just as valid for other editions of TUS.
> Fine with me to leave that out.
I also would leave out the page number.
>> And does the reference have to
>> be placed so awkwardly?
I also wonder why have the reference to Unicode here--we wouldn't include it with every reference to an individual character, but at the same time there's nothing about a reference here that indicates the same reference applies in every other mention of specific characters. Rather, I think it would make more sense to give a reference to Unicode at the end of the introduction:
<suggested text>
Specific characters that are mentioned in this document are to be interpreted as characters in the Unicode coded character set ([Unicode]). Character references within ABNF will follow conventions for ABNF given in [RFC 5234]. Character references outside ABNF will use a literal quotation and include the Unicode code position, as recommended in RFC 5137. For example, "-" U+002D.
</suggested text>
In other respects, I'm OK with the changes Martin suggested.
Peter
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