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Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Call for a volunteer to reviewhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-04.txt



Hi Stephane,
 
It would be good to submit this draft using the submission tool, so that it can show up in the repository as soon as the I-D submission reopens on the Monday of the IETF meeting.
 
Thanks and Regards,
 
Dan
 


From: Stephane.Combes at esa.int [mailto:Stephane.Combes at esa.int]
Sent: Monday, July 20, 2009 2:50 PM
To: gorry at erg.abdn.ac.uk; Bert Wijnen (IETF); draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs at tools.ietf.org; Romascanu, Dan (Dan); ipdvb-chairs at tools.ietf.org; Jari Arkko; mib-doctors at ietf.org; Martin Stiemerling
Cc: pca at verisat.no; hlexow at stmi.com; micheline.lambert at advantechamt.com
Subject: Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Call for a volunteer to reviewhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-04.txt


Dear all,


this is the current status of the corrected draft:


It passed the idnits check and MIB compilation.

It was updated following the previous review by Dan and Bert, as described in the I-D change log:
o        I-D renamed
o        Used name instead of number for DEFVAL where appropriate
o        Clarification added in the MIB module description regarding persistency behavior of objects
o        Integer32 replaced with Unsigned32 where appropriate
o        Obsoleted OBJECT-TYPES (DisplayString, IpAddress) replaced with SnmpAdminString, RFC 4001 and RFC 5017 TCs. Added conformance statements mandating IPv4 support only.
o        Clarification of the conformance clauses added in the MODULE-COMPLIANCE description and the following GROUPs and OBJECTs descriptions.
o        Re-organization of some conformance groups. Each group now refers to precise options or features. 5 new features (specified through dvbRcsSystemSatLabsFeaturesDeclaration object) are therefore defined: ODULIST, EXTNETWORK, EXTCONTROL, EXTCONFIG, EXTSTATUS.
o        Clarification in the RowStatus OBJECTs description whether writable objects in the dynamically created rows can change value while the RowStatus object is active.
o        Security section expanded.

I think you should be able to resume the review from this version.

I will indeed prepare a couple of slides for the ipdvb meeting next week to explain what has been done and the progress so far.


kind regards,

Stephane

Telecommunications Department (TIA-TP)
ESA/ESTEC
Keplerlaan.1,P.O.Box 299, 2201 AZ Noordwijk ZH
Tel:+31 (0)71 56 58 674
Fax:+31 (0)71 56 54 598



Gorry Fairhurst <gorry at erg.abdn.ac.uk>

17/07/2009 18:37

Please respond to
gorry at erg.abdn.ac.uk

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Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net>
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Stephane.Combes at esa.int, Martin Stiemerling <stiemerling at netlab.nec.de>, "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca at avaya.com>, "Bert Wijnen (IETF)" <bertietf at bwijnen.net>, draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs at tools.ietf.org, ipdvb-chairs at tools.ietf.org, mib-doctors at ietf.org
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Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Call for a volunteer to reviewhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-04.txt





This is what I know: the authors are using an old word template and sent
me an updated file today to render to a draft ... but I'm not going to
have access to a PC while I'm on hols so this will be ready as a draft
after the IETF.

I've been promised a few slides on progress for the ipdvb meeting

Gorry


Jari Arkko wrote:
> Any update on this?
>
> Jari
>
> Stephane.Combes at esa.int wrote:
>> Dear Jari,
>>
>> I am sorry for the delay. You can expect to receive the new draft from
>> us in a couple of weeks.
>>
>> kind regards,
>>
>> Stephane
>>
>> Telecommunications Department (TIA-TP)
>> ESA/ESTEC
>> Keplerlaan.1,P.O.Box 299, 2201 AZ Noordwijk ZH
>> Tel:+31 (0)71 56 58 674
>> Fax:+31 (0)71 56 54 598
>>
>> -----Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net> wrote: -----
>>
>>     To: Stephane.Combes at esa.int, gorry at erg.abdn.ac.uk, Martin
>>     Stiemerling <stiemerling at netlab.nec.de>
>>     From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net>
>>     Date: 06/03/2009 01:32PM
>>     cc: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca at avaya.com>, "Bert Wijnen
>>     (IETF)" <bertietf at bwijnen.net>,
>>     draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs at tools.ietf.org,
>>     ipdvb-chairs at tools.ietf.org, mib-doctors at ietf.org
>>     Subject: Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Call for a volunteer to
>>    
>> reviewhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-04.txt
>>
>>
>>     Stephane et al,
>>
>>     Is there a draft update yet available, based on Dan's and Bert's
>>     feedback?
>>
>>     Jari
>>
>>
>
>