RE: [Mip4] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-mip4-dsmipv4-03.txt

["Kent Leung \(kleung\)" <kleung at cisco.com>]

The latest version looks good to me.  Just one minor nit. 

Sect 2.3:

   Additionally, in the explicit mode, the mobile node (when co-located
   mode of operation is used) or the foreign agent (when present) can
   indicate whether IPv6 traffic should be tunneled to the care-of
   address of the home address of the mobile node.  <--- typo: first
"of" should be "or"

Kent

-----Original Message-----
From: Tsirtsis, George [mailto:tsirtsis at qualcomm.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, August 07, 2007 8:10 AM
To: McCann Peter-A001034; mip4 at ietf.org; Kent Leung (kleung)
Subject: RE: [Mip4] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-mip4-dsmipv4-03.txt 

Hi Peter,

Kent sent me his comments offline and I have incorporated them in the
draft. His main comment was about clarifying that implicit mode is
entirely transparent to the FA, which I did.

He is now, I think, on vacation so I could not check the changes with
him. In any case I am sure he will check the document next week when he
will be back.

Regards
George


-----Original Message-----
From: McCann Peter-A001034 [mailto:pete.mccann at motorola.com]
Sent: Tuesday, August 07, 2007 3:52 PM
To: mip4 at ietf.org; kleung at cisco.com
Subject: RE: [Mip4] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-mip4-dsmipv4-03.txt 

Thanks George for submitting the updated version.

Kent, you said during the meeting that you had some comments on this
draft.  Could you send them to the list, so that we can move ahead with
this document?

Thanks,

-Pete

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> This draft is a work item of the Mobility for IPv4 Working Group of 
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> 	Title		: Dual Stack Mobile IPv4
> 	Author(s)	: G. Tsirtsis, et al.
> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-mip4-dsmipv4-03.txt
> 	Pages		: 25
> 	Date		: 2007-8-7
> 
> This specification provides IPv6 extensions to the Mobile IPv4
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>    IPv6 home addresses as well as to move between IPv4 and dual stack
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