Re: [Mipshop] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-mipshop-cga-cba-01.txt

["James Kempf" <kempf at docomolabs-usa.com>]

I briefly reviewed this draft. I think it looks fine, however, I found the 
mass of text in Section 4 somewhat difficult to follow in the absence of a 
protocol "ladder" diagram showing what messages go where and when. I believe 
readability would be improved by such a diagram.

           jak 


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