[Mipshop] [FW: Comments on draft-melia-mipshop-mstp-solution-00]

[Yoshihiro Ohba <yohba at tari.toshiba.com>]

Here is feedback from David Griffith.

Yoshihiro Ohba

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Hello everyone,

I was asked to review draft-melia-mipshop-mstp-solution-00.txt.  I have 
some revisions and comments that I'd like to share with the design team 
and the working group.  Attached is a PDF file of the draft that 
includes suggested changes and wordsmithing in blue as well as 
comments/questions in light blue.  Please let me know what you think.

Regards,
David Griffith

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