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[MMUSIC] RFC 4566bis - issue 3 - misleading text / inconsistency + typo (missing article)
On 10 Nov 2006, at 00:10, Alfred HÎnes wrote:
(3) misleading text / inconsistency + typo (missing article)
Still in Section 5, the second-to-last paragraph on page 8 of RFC 4566
says:
An SDP session description consists of a session-level section
followed by zero or more media-level sections. The session-level
part starts with a "v=" line and continues to the first media-level
| section. Each media-level section starts with an "m=" line and
| continues to the next media-level section or end of the whole
session
description. In general, session-level values are the default for
all media unless overridden by an equivalent media-level value.
The second sentence does not accomodate for an important corner case
mentioned in the first sentence, and thus should be amended with
similar wording as below. The third sentence is imprecise as well,
because the "or" does not uniquely select the 'right' condition.
It should better say:
An SDP session description consists of a session-level section
followed by zero or more media-level sections. The session-level
part starts with a "v=" line and continues to the first media-level
| section (or the end of the whole description, whichever comes
first).
Each media-level section starts with an "m=" line and continues to
| the next media-level section or the end of the whole session
| description - whichever comes first. In general, session-level
values are the default for all media unless overridden by an
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Subject: [MMUSIC] RFC 4566bis - issue 3 - misleading text / inconsistency +
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On 10 Nov 2006, at 00:10, Alfred HÎnes wrote:
(3) misleading text / inconsistency + typo (missing article)
Still in Section 5, the second-to-last paragraph on page 8 of RFC 4566
says:
An SDP session description consists of a session-level section
followed by zero or more media-level sections. The session-level
part starts with a "v=" line and continues to the first media-level
| section. Each media-level section starts with an "m=" line and
| continues to the next media-level section or end of the whole
session
description. In general, session-level values are the default for
all media unless overridden by an equivalent media-level value.
The second sentence does not accomodate for an important corner case
mentioned in the first sentence, and thus should be amended with
similar wording as below. The third sentence is imprecise as well,
because the "or" does not uniquely select the 'right' condition.
It should better say:
An SDP session description consists of a session-level section
followed by zero or more media-level sections. The session-level
part starts with a "v=" line and continues to the first media-level
| section (or the end of the whole description, whichever comes
first).
Each media-level section starts with an "m=" line and continues to
| the next media-level section or the end of the whole session
| description - whichever comes first. In general, session-level
values are the default for all media unless overridden by an
equivalent medlent media-level value.
This looks to be a valid, if minor, issue. I propose to adopt the
change.
--
Colin Perkins
http://csperkins.org/
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ia-level value.
This looks to be a valid, if minor, issue. I propose to adopt the
change.
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Colin Perkins
http://csperkins.org/
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