[MMUSIC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5583 (1829)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5583,
"Signaling Media Decoding Dependency in the Session Description Protocol (SDP)".

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah at TR-Sys.de>

Section: 6.3, pg.12

Original Text
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   The signaling mechanisms defined in this document MUST NOT be used to
|  negotiate between using the attribute-value pair (AVP) [RFC3551] and
                               ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 
   SAVP [RFC3711] profile for RTP.  However, both profiles MAY be used
   separately or jointly with the signaling mechanism defined in this
   document.


Corrected Text
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   The signaling mechanisms defined in this document MUST NOT be used to
|  negotiate between using the Audio/Video Profile (AVP) [RFC3551] and
|  Secure Audio/Video Profile (SAVP) [RFC3711] for RTP.  However, both
   profiles MAY be used separately or jointly with the signaling
   mechanism defined in this document.


Notes
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Rationale:
  Nonsensical acronym expansion (introduced late in the process).
  The correct expansion could have been found by inspection of
  the References in Section 10.1, in the entry for [RFC3551] !

  Only changing the bad expansion turns the sentence weird;
  therefore, the above change proposal tries to balance the
  language by also expanding "SAVP" and saving the trailing
  instance of "profile" (being part of both acronym expansions).

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RFC5583 (draft-ietf-mmusic-decoding-dependency-08)
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Title               : Signaling Media Decoding Dependency in the Session Description Protocol (SDP)
Publication Date    : July 2009
Author(s)           : T. Schierl, S. Wenger
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Multiparty Multimedia Session Control
Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG