[MMUSIC] SDP Directorate: Review of draft-ietf-dccp-udpencap-10
Flemming Andreasen <fandreas@cisco.com> Wed, 06 June 2012 21:43 UTC
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Date: Wed, 06 Jun 2012 17:43:38 -0400
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Subject: [MMUSIC] SDP Directorate: Review of draft-ietf-dccp-udpencap-10
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Hi I am the assigned SDP directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-dccp-udpencap-10 For background on the SDP directorate, please see the FAQ at <http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/sdp.html>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Summary: -------- There are two minor technical issues with the current draft which should be discussed further. There are also a few minor editorial issues, which can be corrected as part of the publication process. New SDP Information Elements: --------------------------- The draft defines a new "a=dccp-port" attribute Technical: --------- 1) Section 5.2 states: <quote> If the "a=rtcp:" attribute [RFC3605] is used, then the signalled port is the DCCP port used for RTCP. </quote I think this warrants further discussion. How will this work if non-consecutive ports are to be used for DCCP-UDP itself and how will this work if a middlebox looks at the "a=rtcp" attribute and assumes the currently defined behavior in RFC 3605, which would effectively provide it with the port information for the (UDP native) RTCP stream today ? 2) Section 5.4 discusses how to negotiate DCCP-UDP versus native DCCP (DCCP-STD) and in particular considers only the use of ICE for this (with the details of the encoding "left for future study"). While this may be appropriate for the basic use of DCCP-UDP versus DCCP-STD, it is arguably not appropriate when it comes to negotiating different RTP profiles within each of these (which are defined in this draft). SDP Capability Negotiation would be more suitable for this, as described in RFC 5939 Section 3.7. At a minimum, a reference to that effect and those considerations should be provided. 3) Section 3.8, 4th paragraph: s/a DCCP-UDP server must therefore/a DCCP-UDP MUST therefore/ ?? ^^^^ Editorial: -------- Various instances of repeat words and a few spelling errors that should be caught by a spell-checker. Also: - Section 5.1, first paragraph: s/(from [RFC4566]:/(from [RFC4566]):/ ^ - Section 5.4, second paragraph s/DCCPx/DCCP/ - Section 6, last paragraph: s/A firewall than/A firewall that/ ^ - ICE-TCP is now RFC 6544 Thanks -- Flemming
- [MMUSIC] SDP Directorate: Review of draft-ietf-dc… Flemming Andreasen
- Re: [MMUSIC] SDP Directorate: Review of draft-iet… Gonzalo Camarillo