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Re: [netlmm] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-netlmm-pmip6-ipv4-support-17 (fwd)



Hi Julien,

Thanks for your review and also for the textual suggestions. We will
review and respond.

Regards
Sri


On Tue, 22 Sep 2009, Laganier, Julien wrote:

Hello,

I have reviewed the last version of this draft. Below are my comments.

3.1.2.1.  Processing Proxy Binding Updates

  o  If there is an IPv4 Home Address Request option present in the
     received Proxy Binding Update message, but if there is no Home
     Network Prefix option [RFC-5213] present in the request, the local
     mobility anchor MUST NOT reject the request as specified in
     Section 5.3.1 of [RFC-5213].  At least one instance of any of
     these two options, either the IPv4 Home Address Request option or
     the Home Network Prefix option, MUST be present.  If there is not
     a single instance of any of these two options present in the
     request, the local mobility anchor MUST reject the request and
     send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message with Status field set
     to MISSING_HOME_NETWORK_PREFIX_OPTION (Missing mobile node's home
     network prefix option) [RFC-5213].

Reword into: If there is an IPv4 Home Address Request option but no Home Network Prefix option [RFC-5213] in the received Proxy Binding Update message, the local mobility anchor MUST NOT reject the request as specified in Section 5.3.1 of [RFC-5213].  At least one instance of any of these two options MUST be present, either the IPv4 Home Address Request option or the Home Network Prefix option, MUST be present.  If there is not a single instance of any of these two  options present in the request, the local mobility anchor MUST reject the request and send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message with Status field set to MISSING_HOME_NETWORK_PREFIX_OPTION (Missing mobile node's home network prefix option) [RFC-5213].

  o  If there is at least one instance of Home Network Prefix option
     [RFC-5213] present in the received Proxy Binding Update message,
     but either if it is known from the mobile node's policy profile
     that the mobile node is not authorized for IPv6 service or if IPv6
     routing not enabled in the home network, the local mobility anchor
     MUST reject the request and send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement
     message with the Status field set to
     NOT_AUTHORIZED_FOR_IPV6_MOBILITY_SERVICE (mobile node not
     authorized for IPv6 mobility service).

Reword into: If there is at least one instance of Home Network Prefix option [RFC-5213] present in the received Proxy Binding Update message but it is known from the mobile node's policy profile that the mobile node is not authorized for IPv6 service, or IPv6 routing is not enabled in the home network, the local mobility anchor MUST reject the request and send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message with the Status field set to NOT_AUTHORIZED_FOR_IPV6_MOBILITY_SERVICE (mobile node not authorized for IPv6 mobility service).

  o  If there is an IPv4 Home Address Request option present in the
     received Proxy Binding Update message, but either if it is known
     from the mobile node's policy profile that the mobile node is not
     authorized for IPv4 service or if IPv4 routing not enabled in the
     home network, the local mobility anchor MUST reject the request
     and send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message with the Status
     field set to NOT_AUTHORIZED_FOR_IPV4_MOBILITY_SERVICE (mobile node
     not authorized for IPv4 mobility service).

Reword into: If there is an IPv4 Home Address Request option present in the received Proxy Binding Update message but it is known from the mobile node's policy profile that the mobile node is not authorized for IPv4 service, or IPv4 routing is not enabled in the home network, the local mobility anchor MUST reject the request and send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message with the Status field set to NOT_AUTHORIZED_FOR_IPV4_MOBILITY_SERVICE (mobile node not authorized for IPv4 mobility service).

  o  If there exists a Binding Cache entry that can be associated with
     the request and if it is determined that the request is a re-
     registration request for extending IPv4 home address mobility
     support to the existing IPv6-only mobility session, considerations
     from Section 3.1.2.2 MUST be applied with respect to IPv4 support.

Reword into: If there exists a Binding Cache entry that can be associated with the request and if is determined that the request is a re-registration request for extending IPv4 home address mobility support to the existing IPv6-only mobility session, considerations from Section 3.1.2.2 MUST be applied with respect to IPv4 support.

3.1.2.2.  Initial Binding Registration (New Mobility Session)

  o  If there is an IPv4 Home Address Request option with the IPv4
     address in the option set to a NON_ZERO value, the local mobility
     anchor before accepting the request MUST ensure the address is
     topologically anchored on the local mobility anchor and
     furthermore the mobile node is authorized to use that address.  If
     the mobile node is not authorized for that specific address, the
     local mobility anchor MUST reject the request and send a Proxy
     Binding Acknowledgement message with the Status field set to
     NOT_AUTHORIZED_FOR_IPV4_HOME_ADDRESS (mobile node not authorized
     for the requesting IPv4 address).  It MUST also include the IPv4
     Home Address Reply option in the reply with the status field value
     in the option set to 129 (Administratively prohibited).

Reword into: If there is an IPv4 Home Address Request option with the IPv4 address in the option set to a NON_ZERO value, before accepting the request, the local mobility anchor MUST ensure 1) that the address is topologically anchored at the local mobility anchor and 2) that the mobile node is authorized to use that address.  If the mobile node is not authorized for that specific address, the local mobility anchor MUST reject the request and send a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message with the Status field set to NOT_AUTHORIZED_FOR_IPV4_HOME_ADDRESS (mobile node not authorized for the requesting IPv4 address).  It MUST also include the IPv4 Home Address Reply option in the reply with the status field value in the option set to 129 (Administratively prohibited).

Question: What does the LMA do if the address is not topologically anchored at the LMA? What's the status code?

  o  Upon accepting the request, the local mobility anchor MUST create
     a Binding Cache entry for this mobility session.  However, if the
     request also contains one or more Home Network Prefix options
     [RFC-5213], there should still be only one Binding Cache entry
     that should be created for this mobility session.  The created
     Binding Cache entry MUST be used for managing both IPv4 and IPv6
     home address bindings.  The fields in the Binding Cache entry MUST
     be updated with the accepted values for that session.

I found that bullet a bit confusing, especially "however... there should still be". How about: Upon accepting the request, if there exists a Binding Cache entry that can be associated with the Home Network Prefix option(s) [RFC-5213] present in the request
and it is determined that the request is a re-registration request for extending IPv4 home address mobility support to the existing IPv6-only mobility session, the local mobility anchor MUST update the fields in the Binding Cache entry with the accepted values for that session. If there exists no such Binding Cache entry, the local mobility anchor MUST create a new Binding Cache entry for this mobility session.  This ensures that a single
Binding Cache entry is used to manage both IPv4 and IPv6 bindings.

  o  The local mobility anchor MUST establish a bi-directional tunnel
     to the mobile access gateway and with the encapsulation mode set
     to the negotiated mode for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic.
     When using IPv6 transport, the encapsulation mode is IPv4-or-IPv6-
     over-IPv6 (IPv4 or IPv6 packet carried as a payload of an IPv6
     packet).  When using IPv4 transport, the encapsulation mode is as
     specified in Section 4.0.

s/and with/with/
s/negotiated mode for carrying/mode negotiated to carry/

  o  The local mobility anchor MUST create an IPv4 host route (or a
     platform specific equivalent function that sets up the forwarding)
     for tunneling the packets received for the mobile node's home
     address associated with this mobility session.

Reword into: The local mobility anchor MUST create an IPv4 host route towards
the mobile node's home address that points to the tunnel associated with this mobility session.

3.1.2.4.  Binding Lifetime Extension (After handoff)

  o  If there is no Home Network Prefix option(s) [RFC-5213] present in
     the request, but if the Binding Cache entry associated [...]

Reword into: If there is no Home Network Prefix option(s) [RFC-5213] present in the request but the Binding Cache entry associated [...]

  o  The local mobility anchor MUST remove the previously created IPv4
     host route (or the forwarding state) and the dynamically created
     bi-directional tunnel for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic (if
     there are no other mobile nodes for which the tunnel is being
     used).  This will remove the routing state towards the mobile
     access gateway where the mobile node was anchored prior to the
     handoff.

Reword into:  The local mobility anchor MUST remove the previously created IPv4 host route. If there are no other mobile nodes for which the tunnel is being used, the local mobility anchor MUST remove the dynamically created bi-directional tunnel for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic. This will remove the routing state towards the mobile access gateway where the mobile node was anchored prior to the handoff.

  o  The local mobility anchor MUST create a bi-directional tunnel to
     the mobile access gateway that sent the request (if there is no
     existing bi-directional tunnel) and with the encapsulation mode
     set to the negotiated mode for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic.
     An IPv4 host route for tunneling the packets received for the
     mobile node's IPv4 home address MUST also be added.

Reword into: If there is no existing bi-directional tunnel to the mobile access gateway that sent the request, the local mobility anchor MUST create one with the encapsulation mode set to the negotiated mode for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic. An IPv4 host route for tunneling the packets received for the mobile node's IPv4 home address MUST also be added.

3.1.2.5.  Binding De-Registration

  All the considerations from Section 5.3.5 of [RFC-5213] MUST be
  applied.  Additionally, for removing the IPv4 state as part of the
  Binding Cache entry deletion, the IPv4 host route and the dynamically
  created bi-directional tunnel for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic
  (if there are no other mobile nodes for which the tunnel is being
  used) MUST be removed. [...]

Reword into: All the considerations from Section 5.3.5 of [RFC-5213] MUST be applied.  Additionally, for removing the IPv4 state as part of the Binding Cache entry deletion, the IPv4 host route MUST be removed, and the dynamically created bi-directional tunnel for carrying the IPv4 payload traffic MUST be removed if there are no other mobile nodes for which the tunnel is being used. [...]

3.1.2.6.  Constructing the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement Message

  o  Section 5.3.6 of [RFC-5213] requires the local mobility anchor to
     include at least one instance of Home Network Prefix option [RFC-
     5213] in the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message that it sends
     to the mobile access gateway.  However, if the received Proxy
     Binding Update message has only the IPv4 Home Address Request
     option and did not contain the Home Network Prefix option(s), then
     the local mobility anchor MUST NOT include any Home Network Prefix
     option(s) in the reply.  However, there MUST be at least one
     instance of either the Home Network Prefix option [RFC-5213] or
     the IPv4 Home Address Reply option present in the Proxy Binding
     Acknowledgement message.

There's two 'however' above. Suggest to reword into: Section 5.3.6 of [RFC-5213] requires the local mobility anchor to include at least one instance of Home Network Prefix option [RFC-5213] in the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message that it sends to the mobile access gateway.  However, if the received Proxy Binding Update message has the IPv4 Home Address Request option and does not contain the Home Network Prefix option(s), then the local mobility anchor MUST NOT include any Home Network Prefix options in the reply. There MUST be at least one instance of either the Home Network Prefix option [RFC-5213] or the IPv4 Home Address Reply option present in the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message.

  o  The IPv4 Home Address Reply option MUST be present in the Proxy
     Binding Acknowledgement message.

Insert: "as per the requirements below" before the period.

  o  The IPv4 Default-Router Address option MUST be present, if the
     Status field value in the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message is
     set to 0 (Proxy Binding Update Accepted).  Otherwise, the option
     MUST NOT be present.  If the option is present, the default router
     address in the option MUST be set to the mobile node's default
     router address.

Shouldn't the IPv4 Default-Router Address option present only if the IPv4 Home Address Reply option is present as well?

3.1.2.7.  Binding Cache Entry Lookup Considerations

  The Binding Cache entry lookup considerations specified in section
  5.4.1.1 of [RFC-5213] uses the Home Network Prefix option [RFC-5213]
  as the key parameter for identifying the Binding Cache entry.
  However, when there is not a single Home Network Prefix option with a
  NON_ZERO value present in the request, but if there is an IPv4 Home
  Address option with a NON_ZERO value present in the request, then the
  following considerations MUST be applied.

Reword the second sentence into: "However, when the request contains an IPv4 Home Address option but no Home Network Prefix option with a NON_ZERO value, then the following considerations MUST be applied."

  o  These rules specified in section 5.4.1.1 of [RFC-5213], assume the
     presence of one or more IPv6 home network prefixes in the received
     request and also in the Binding Cache entry.  But, when using the
     IPv4 home address as the search key, these considerations MUST
     always assume just one single IPv4 home address, both in the
     request and also in the Binding Cache entry.

s/These rules/The rules/

Reword into "The rules specified in section 5.4.1.1 of [RFC-5213] assume the presence of one or more IPv6 home network prefixes in both the received request and the Binding Cache entry.  However, when using the IPv4 home address as the search key, these considerations MUST assume that a single IPv4 home address is present in both the received request and the Binding Cache entry."

3.1.3.  Routing Considerations for the Local Mobility Anchor


  Intercepting Packets Sent to the Mobile Node's IPv4 home address:

  o  When the local mobility anchor is serving a mobile node, it MUST
     advertise a connected route in to the Routing Infrastructure for
     the mobile node's IPv4 home address or for its home subnet, in
     order to receive packets that are sent to the mobile node's IPv4
     home address.  This essentially enables IPv4 routers in that
     network to detect the local mobility anchor as the last-hop router
     for that subnet.

s/in to/into/

  o  All the reverse tunneled packets that the local mobility anchor
     receives from the mobile access gateway, after removing the tunnel
     header MUST be routed to the destination specified in the inner
     IPv4 packet header.  These routed packets will have the source
     address field set to the mobile node's IPv4 home address.

Reword into: "All the reverse tunneled packets that the local mobility anchor receives from the mobile access gateway MUST be forwarded to the destination specified in the inner IPv4 packet header after removal of the outer tunnel header. These packets will have the source address field set to the mobile node's IPv4 home address."


3.2.3.1.  Mobile Node Attachment and Initial Binding Registration

     *  The mobile access gateway MAY also ask the local mobility
        anchor for dynamic IPv4 home address allocation.  It can
        include exactly one instance of the IPv4 Home Address option
        with the IPv4 home address and the prefix length fields in the
        option set to ALL_ZERO value.  Furthermore, the (P) flag in the
        option MUST be set to 0.  This essentially serves as a request
        to the local mobility anchor for the IPv4 home address
        allocation.

Removes "essentially", or list what this does besides requesting IPv4 address allocation.

3.2.3.2.  Receiving Proxy Binding Acknowledgement

  o  If the received Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message has the
     Status field value set to 0 (Proxy Binding Update accepted), the
     mobile access gateway MUST update a Binding Update List entry for
     that mobile node.  The entry MUST be updated with the assigned
     IPv4 home address and other accepted registration values

  o  If the received Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message has the
     Status field value set to 0 (Proxy Binding Update accepted) and
     has the IPv4 Home Address Reply option set to a value that
     indicates that the request was accepted by the local mobility
     anchor, the mobile access gateway MUST establish a bi-directional
     tunnel to the local mobility anchor (if there is no existing bi-
     directional tunnel to that local mobility anchor) and with the
     encapsulation mode set to IPv4-or-IPv6-over-IPv6 (IPv4 or IPv6
     packet carried as a payload of an IPv6 packet).  Considerations
     from Section 5.6.1 of [RFC-5213] MUST be applied for managing the
     dynamically created bi-directional tunnel.  However, when using
     IPv4 transport, the encapsulation mode MUST be set to the
     negotiated encapsulation mode, as specified in Section 4 of this
     specification.

  o  The mobile access gateway MUST set up the route for forwarding the
     IPv4 packets received from the mobile node (using its IPv4 home
     address) through the bi-directional tunnel set up for that mobile
     node.

  o  The default router address MUST be obtained from the IPv4 Default-
     Router Address option present in the received Proxy Binding
     Acknowledgement message.  The mobile access gateway SHOULD
     configure this address on its interface and respond to any ARP
     requests sent by the mobile node for resolving the hardware
     address of the default router.  However, since the link between
     the mobile access gateway and the mobile node is a point-to-point
     link, implementations will be able receive any packets sent to the
     default router address without having to explicitly configure the
     default router address on its interface.  The mobile access
     gateway MAY also use the default router address as the source
     address for any datagrams sent to the mobile node and originated
     by the mobile access gateway itself.  It MUST also use this
     address in the DHCP Router option [RFC-2132] in the DHCP messages.

Why are the four bullets above separate? In particular, can the first bullet happens but not the second? It seems to me they should happen together and should be merged. Also, the part on setting up the bidirectional tunnel is using parenthesis while their content is not parenthetical. I suggest to reword "the mobile access gateway MUST establish a bi-directional tunnel to the local mobility anchor (if there is no existing bi-directional tunnel to that local mobility anchor) and with the encapsulation mode set to IPv4-or-IPv6-over-IPv6 (IPv4 or IPv6 packet carried as a payload of an IPv6 packet)" into "the mobile access gateway MUST establish a bi-directional tunnel to the local mobility anchor with the encapsulation mode set to IPv4-or-IPv6-over-IPv6 (IPv4 or IPv6 packet carried as a payload of an IPv6 packet) if there is no existing bi-directional tunnel to that local mobility anchor"

3.2.4.  Routing Considerations for the Mobile Access Gateway

  o  The mobile access gateway SHOULD use Proxy ARP [RFC-925] to reply
     to ARP Requests that it receives from the mobile node seeking
     address resolutions for the destinations on the mobile node's home
     subnet.  When receiving an ARP Request, the local mobility anchor
     SHOULD examine the target IP address of the Request, and if this
     IP address matches the mobile node's IPv4 home subnet, it SHOULD
     transmit a Proxy ARP Reply.  However, on certain types of links,
     the mobile node does not use ARP for address resolutions, instead
     it forwards all the packets to the mobile access gateway.  On such
     types of links, the mobile access gateway is not required to
     support Proxy ARP function.  At the same time, implementations not
     supporting the Proxy ARP function on links where the mobile node
     uses ARP for seeking address resolutions for the destinations on
     the mobile node's home subnet will result in communication
     failure.

Hmm. I had completely overlooked the proxy ARP function in earlier revisions of this draft... this is introducing multilink subnet issues to the IPv4 support for PMIPv6. Do we want to call them out explicitly and reference RFC 4903?


3.4.  Supporting DHCP-Based Address Configuration

     *  If the mobile node attaches to the Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain
        through multiple physical interfaces, the DHCP server will
        uniquely identify each of those interfaces and will perform
        address assignment.  The DHCP server will identify the
        interface as specified in RFC 2131.  The mobile node SHOULD
        generate and use the "Client-identifier" for each physical
        interface according to [RFC-4361]. [...]

This is placing a requirement on a mobile node. Since our charter had the "no host change" clause, are we sure that this is something we want to do? In other words, will the protocol break without RFC 4361 styled client IDs?


     *  If the mobile node is capable of performing handoff between
        interfaces, as per [RFC-5213], a "Client-identifier" value MUST
        be used for the attachment point that is not tied to any of the
        physical interfaces.  The identifier MUST be generated
        according to [RFC-4361], which guarantees that the identifier
        is stable and unique across all "Client-identifier" values in
        use in the Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain.

That one also seems problematic in light of the "no host change" clause. I thought inter-access handoffs were out of scope...

4.  IPv4 Transport Support

  o  The local mobility anchor and the mobile access gateway are both
     configured and reachable using an IPv4 address.  Additionally,
     both entities are also IPv6 enabled and have configured IPv6
     addresses on their interfaces, as specified in [RFC-5213], but are
     reachable only over an IPv4 transport network.

How about 's/but are reachable only/ but can only communicate together/' ?

  o  The mobile access gateway can be potentially in a private IPv4
     network behind a NAT [RFC-3022] device, with a private IPv4
     address configured on its egress interface.  But, the local
     mobility anchor must not be behind a NAT and must be using a
     globally routable IPv4 address.  However, both the local mobility
     anchor and the mobile access gateway can be in the same private
     IPv4 routing domain, i.e., when both are configured with private
     IPv4 addresses and with no need for NAT translation between them.

Reword into: "The mobile access gateway can potentially be in a private IPv4 network behind a NAT [RFC-3022] device and be assigned with a private IPv4 address [RFC-1918] on the interface towards the LMA. In that case, the local mobility anchor must not be behind a NAT and must be using a global unicast IPv4 address.  However, both the local mobility anchor and the mobile access gateway can be in the same private IPv4 routing domain and both be assigned with private IPv4 addresses [RFC-1918] as long as there's no NAT box between them.

  o  The mobile node can be an IPv6, IPv4 or a dual IPv4/IPv6 node and
     the IPv4 transport support specified in this section is agnostic
     to the type of address mobility enabled for that mobile node.

s/IPv6, IPv4 or a dual IPv4/IPv6 node/IPv6, IPv4, or a dual stack IPv4/IPv6 node/

4.1.3.1.  Processing Proxy Binding Updates

  o  Upon accepting the request, the local mobility anchor MUST set up
     an IPv4 bi-directional tunnel to the mobile access gateway.  The
     tunnel endpoint addresses are IPv4-LMAA and the IPv4-Proxy-CoA.
     The encapsulation mode MUST be determined by applying the
     following considerations:

I thought a tunnel is created only in case there's not one already. The text above contradicts that.


  o  The local mobility anchor MUST send the Proxy Binding
     Acknowledgement message with the Status field value set to (0)
     (Proxy Binding Update Accepted).  The message MUST be constructed
     as specified in Section 4.1.3.2.

I'm not sure about this. It reads like the LMA always sends a PBAck with status field set to success. I don't think that is really the case...

4.1.3.2.  Constructing the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement Message

  o  The Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message MUST be encapsulated in
     an IPv4 packet.  However, if the received Proxy Binding Update
     message was sent encapsulated in an IPv4-UDP packet, then the
     Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message MUST be encapsulated in the
     UDP header of an IPv4 packet.

How about "The Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message MUST be encapsulated as the Binding Update message triggering it, i.e., in an IPv4 packet, or an IPv4-UDP packet."

  o  If the mobile access gateway and the local mobility anchor are
     using globally routable IPv4 addresses and if there is a security
     association that is based on IPv4 addresses, then the encapsulated
     IPv4 packet (containing the IPv6 Proxy Binding Acknowledgement)
     MUST be protected using IPsec ESP [RFC-4301] mode.  There is no
     need to apply IPsec ESP header to the IPv6 packet.  In all other
     cases, the Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message MUST be protected
     using IPsec prior to the IPv4 or IPv4-UDP encapsulation.

In "using IPsec ESP [RFC-4301] mode", are we missing "tunnel" or "transport" before "mode"? Also it seems the reference to 4301 should come at the end of the sentence... If the last sentence means IPsec is applied to the inner IPv6 header, maybe it's better to say so, as well as to specify the mode, presumably transport.

4.2.2. Signaling considerations

  o  If the received Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message is
     encapsulated in IPv4 or IPv4 UDP packet, the message MUST be
     authenticated after removing the outer IPv4 or IPv4-UDP header.
     Considerations from Section 4 of [RFC-5213] MUST be applied for
     authenticating and authorizing the message.

The paragraph above seems to be in contradiction with the one I quoted above which said in some situations there can be an IPv4 SA. I guess this has to be corrected. Also s/IPv4 UDP/IPv4-UDP"?

  o  If the Status field indicates Success, the mobile access gateway
     MUST setup a bi-directional tunnel to the local mobility anchor.

  o  Upon accepting the request, the mobile access gateway MUST set up
     an IPv4 bi-directional tunnel to the local mobility anchor.  The
     tunnel endpoint addresses are IPv4-Proxy-CoA and the IPv4-LMAA.
     The encapsulation mode MUST be determined from the below
     considerations.

These two are redundant aren't they? Also, the tunnel only needs to be setup when it's not present already. That should be covered.

  o  The encapsulation mode for the bi-directional tunnel MUST be set
     to IPv4.  However, if the value of the configuration variable,
     UseIPv4UDPEncapForSignalingMessages, is set to (1), then the
     following considerations MUST be applied.

     *  If there is a NAT Detection option [RFC-5555] in the received
        Proxy Binding Acknowledgement message and if the value of the
        configuration flag, UseIPv4UDPEncapForSignalingMessages, is set
        to value of (1), then the encapsulation mode for the tunnel
        MUST be set to IPv4-UDP.  Otherwise the encapsulation mode MUST
        be set to IPv4.

The "if UseIPv4UDPEncapForSignalingMessages is set to (1)" is redundant in the two paragraphs above...

4.2.2.1.  Constructing the Proxy Binding Update Message

  o  The Proxy Binding Update message MUST be protected using IPsec ESP
     [RFC-4301], as specified in [RFC-5213].  The protection MUST be
     applied on the IPv6 packet of the Proxy Binding Update message,
     prior to the IPv4 encapsulation.

Same as earlier: somewhere it is said that an IPv4 SA can be applied, which isn't covered here.

4.3.  IPsec Considerations

4.3.1.  PBU and PBA

  The following section describes how IPsec is used for protecting the
  signaling messages and data packets between the local mobility anchor
  and mobile access gateway when using IPv4 transport.

  The following are the SPD example entries to protect PBU and PBA on
  the local mobility anchor and mobile access gateway.

          MAG SPD-S:
            - IF local_address = Proxy-CoA_1 &
                 remote_address = LMAA_1 & proto = MH &
                 local_mh_type = PBU & remote_mh_type = PBAck
              Then use SA ESP transport mode

          LMA SPD-S:
            - IF local_address = LMAA_1 &
                 remote_address = Proxy-CoA_1 & proto = MH &
                 local_mh_type = PBAck & remote_mh_type = PBU
              Then use SA ESP transport mode

Same here. There's no example for the IPv4 IPsec SA....

  MAG's IPsec module
   :
   :     IPv6 header (src=Proxy-CoA, dst=LMAA)
   :     ESP header in transport mode
   :     Mobility header
   :        PBU (p flag)
   :           Home Network Prefix option
   :           IPv4 Home Address Request option
   :           IPv4 Care-of Address option
   :    : * After adding the ESP header, the PBU is returned to the PMIP
   :   module and is encapsulated into the UDP and IPv4 headers.
   :   This requires a Proxy Mobile IPv6 specific IPsec implementation,
   :   which knows that the packet needs to be passed back to the PMIP
   :   module, instead of sending it out via the normal forwarding

I'm not sure about this statement. If the IPv4-UDP tunnel appears as a tunnel interface, and a routing table entry makes the destination IPv6 LMA address available at the other end of that tunnel things might work just well with a native or bump in the stack IPsec implementation.


  LMA (received at DSMIPv6 port)
   :
   :     IPv6 header (src=Proxy-CoA, dst=LMAA)
   :     ESP header in transport mode
   :     Mobility header
   :        PBU (p flag)
   :           Home Network Prefix option
   :           IPv4 Home Address Request option
   :           IPv4 Care-of Address option
   :
   :  *In addition, IPv4-Proxy-CoA and the sport (Z) needs to
   :  be passed along with the packet to ensure correct processing.
  \:/
  LMA's IPsec module
   :
   :     IPv6 header (src=Proxy-CoA, dst=LMAA)
   :     Mobility header
   :        PBU (p flag)
   :           Home Network Prefix option
   :           IPv4 Home Address Request option
   :           IPv4 Care-of Address option
   :
   :  *In addition, IPv4-Proxy-CoA and the sport (Z) need to
   :  be passed with the packet to ensure correct processing.
  \:/
  LMA's PMIP module

Here, I am not sure I agree with the two (*) above that says the IPv4-Proxy-CoA and the sport (Z) have to be passed along with the packet. The LMA PMIP module could store that information when the packet is received at the DSMIPv6 port and match it back to the decapsulated packet after IPsec processing, no?

The same comments applies to sending/receiving the PBA so I'm not going to repeat myself.

--julien









-----Original Message-----
From: netlmm-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:netlmm-bounces at ietf.org] On
Behalf Of Sri Gundavelli
Sent: Saturday, September 12, 2009 8:17 AM
To: netlmm at ietf.org
Subject: [netlmm] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-netlmm-pmip6-
ipv4-support-17 (fwd)



This resolves all the IESG comments.

- Added 4361 ref, on DHCP client identifiers and some nits
   that got in the prev version. Minor textual change on
   how RFC-2131 identies the DHCP bindings, as suggested
   by Ralph.
- Addresses Pekka savola's comments.

Regards
Sri





---------- Forwarded message ----------
Date: Sat, 12 Sep 2009 08:09:13 -0700 (PDT)
From: IETF I-D Submission Tool <idsubmission at ietf.org>
To: sgundave at cisco.com
Cc: ryuji at us.toyota-itc.com
Subject: New Version Notification for
     draft-ietf-netlmm-pmip6-ipv4-support-17


A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-netlmm-pmip6-ipv4-support-17.txt has
been successfuly submitted by Sri Gundavelli and posted to the IETF
repository.

Filename:      draft-ietf-netlmm-pmip6-ipv4-support
Revision:      17
Title:                 IPv4 Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6
Creation_date:         2009-09-12
WG ID:                 netlmm
Number_of_pages: 62

Abstract:
This document specifies extensions to Proxy Mobile IPv6 protocol for
adding IPv4 protocol support.  The scope of IPv4 protocol support is
two-fold: 1) enable IPv4 home address mobility support to the mobile
node. 2) allowing the mobility entities in the Proxy Mobile IPv6
domain to exchange signaling messages over an IPv4 transport network.



The IETF Secretariat.


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