[Pce] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5623 (1897)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5623,
"Framework for PCE-Based Inter-Layer MPLS and GMPLS Traffic Engineering".

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah at TR-Sys.de>

Section: 4.1,

Original Text
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a) Section 4.1, 2nd paragraph (bottom of page 10):

   A VNT Manager (VNTM) is defined as a functional element that manages
   and controls the VNT.  The PCE and VNT Manager are distinct
|  functional elements that may or may not be collocated.
                                                ^^

b) Section 4.2.4, trailing Note below Table 1 (on page 22):

   * Note that, in case of NSM-VNTM cooperation (separate flavor) and
     single PCE inter-layer path computation, the PCE function used by
|    NMS and VNTM may be collocated, but it will operate on separate
     TEDs.
                           ^^

Corrected Text
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a)

   A VNT Manager (VNTM) is defined as a functional element that manages
   and controls the VNT.  The PCE and VNT Manager are distinct
|  functional elements that may or may not be co-located.

b)

   * Note that, in case of NSM-VNTM cooperation (separate flavor) and
     single PCE inter-layer path computation, the PCE function used by
|    NMS and VNTM may be co-located, but it will operate on separate
     TEDs.
 

Notes
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Rationale:
  "collocated" and "co-located" (or "colocated") have very different
  semantics!  The latter seems to be the appropriate choice: two
  logical entites (or subsystems) are located within the same system.
  The former means "arranged/placed/sorted *somehow*, in the proper
  way", without emphasis on neighborship or common enclosement.

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RFC5623 (draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-frwk-10)
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Title               : Framework for PCE-Based Inter-Layer MPLS and GMPLS Traffic Engineering
Publication Date    : September 2009
Author(s)           : E. Oki, T. Takeda, JL. Le Roux, A. Farrel
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Path Computation Element
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG