RE: [PCN] Feedback tohttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-briscoe-tsvwg-cl-architecture-03.txt

[<philip.eardley at bt.com>]

Thanks! 
I basically like your Summary & your comments on simplicity,
scalability, robustness. 
Will comment on some detailed points when back on-line [away next week],
if they haven't already been covered. 
Best wishes,
Phil 


-----Original Message-----
From: Michael Menth [mailto:menth at informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de] 
Sent: 22 September 2006 14:42
To: pcn at ietf.org
Subject: [PCN] Feedback
tohttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-briscoe-tsvwg-cl-architectur
e-03.txt

Hi all,

I know that the current focus of this list is more on the problem 
statement and the charter. However, as I have recently read the drafts, 
I'd like to share my thoughts with you before lectures start in October 
and make me more busy than I am now.

As I mentioned in previous emails, I consider the technical contents 
very good, but its presentation could be simplified such that also 
non-experts get its basic ideas right at first reading. A slightly more 
precise terminology also helps although I am also already used to the 
current nomenclature.
* I tried an alternative wording of the summary given in Section 1.1 of
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-briscoe-tsvwg-cl-architecture-
03.txt 
and hope that I understood the draft correctly. This might be useful to 
tell people quickly what kind of network admission control (NAC) the PCN

list is currently concerned with.
* I tried to outline the salient features of the NAC to point out why 
the solution is good (Simplicity, Scalability, Robustness).

I send these issues in two extra emails.

Best regards,

    Michael

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