[pcp] #66: server-selection comments from Hassnaa Moustafa
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Subject: [pcp] #66: server-selection comments from Hassnaa Moustafa
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#66: server-selection comments from Hassnaa Moustafa There are few editorial comments on draft (draft-ietf-pcp-server- selection-02) as follows: 1. The term IP address family used in the draft needs more text clarification (to say for example IPv4 or IPv6 or maybe other points that the authors have in mind). 2. The IP addresses used in the diagram (in the example of Section 5) is not very consistent with the IP addresses mentioned in the text that explains the diagram. -- -------------------------------------+------------------------------------- Reporter: | Owner: draft-ietf-pcp-server- hassnaa.moustafa@intel.com | selection@tools.ietf.org Type: defect | Status: new Priority: minor | Milestone: milestone1 Component: server-selection | Version: 1.0 Severity: In WG Last Call | Keywords: -------------------------------------+------------------------------------- Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/pcp/trac/ticket/66> pcp <http://tools.ietf.org/pcp/>
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