Forwarding comments on behalf of Mario, because I never saw them hit the
mailing list...
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Daryl Malas
CableLabs
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Marian Delkinov [mailto:marian.delkinov at ericsson.com]
> Sent: Friday, February 20, 2009 3:43 AM
> To: Daryl Malas
> Cc: pmol at ietf.org
> Subject: RE: IETF Draft: SIP Performance Metrics-03
>
>
> Daryl,
>
> Sorry, for my perhaps delayed feedback! (I'm back after a
> long absence).
>
> I checked the new version (03) of the draft. All the texts
> that I had comments before are fine.
>
> However, I found some changes in other texts, based on other
> people's comments, that I have to disagree with.
>
> ---
> Chapter 3, page 5:
> As defined above, T1 is associated with the start of a request and
> also serves as the time-of-day stamp associated with a single
> specific measurement. The time offset [RFC2330] is the difference
> between T1 and a recognized primary source of time, such as UTC
> (offset = T1- UTC).
>
> Instead of using the term "time offset" above, I suggest
> "clock's offset". Thus the text will comply with the
> terminology used in RFC2330, chapter 10.1.
>
> ---
> Same page, the text:
> When measurement results will be correlated with other results or
> information using time-of-day stamps, then the time clock that
> supplies T1 SHOULD be synchronized to a primary time source, to
> minimize the error in the time offset. The time offset MUST be
> reported with each measurement.
>
> I fail to understand the sentence "to minimize the error in
> the time offset". There is no ERROR in the time offset,
> because the time offset IS the error. Moreover RFC2330
> doesn't define such error, the draft doesn't define it
> either, so better avoid using it. I suggest keeping the text
> as in version-02, but using "clock's offset".
>
> In addition, when correlating measurements, it's much more
> important all clocks used at the measurement sources to be
> synchronized to each other, rather than be synchronized to
> primary time source. Thus the relative offset should be minimized.
>
> So the text should be:
>
> When measurement results will be correlated with other results or
> information using time-of-day stamps, then the time clock that
> supplies T1 SHOULD be synchronized to a primary time source, to
> minimize clock's offset. The clocks used at the different
> measurement sources SHOULD be synchronized to each other, to
> minimize the relative offset (as defined in RFC2330). The
> clock's offset and the relative offset MUST be reported with
> each measurement.
>
> ---
> Respectively and for the same reasons, the following text:
> The accuracy of the T4-T1 interval is also critical to maintain and
> report. The difference in errors between the time offsets
> at T1 and
> T4 is associated with the clock's skew [RFC2330].
>
> Should be kept as in version -02, but use the "clock's offset" term:
>
> The accuracy of the T4-T1 interval is also critical to maintain and
> report. The difference between clock's offsets at T1 and T4 is the
> error for the measurement and is associated with the
> clock's skew [RFC2330].
>
>
> I'm OK with all other changes in version -03 compared to version -02.
>
> Best regards!
> Mario.
>
>
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