[PMOL] Editorial comments on the framework draft

[Benoit Claise <bclaise at cisco.com>]

Hi,

Not sure if those two were mentioned already...

1. You might want to mention what compagg is. It's in the reference but ...

3.3.2 Index (from compagg)
   An Index is a metric for which the output value range has been
   selected for convenience or clarity, and the behavior of which is
   selected to support ease of understanding (e.g. G.107 R Factor).
   The deterministic function for an index is often developed after
   the index range and behavior have been determined. 
  

2. I see two instances of "[Ref ?]"

Regards, Benoit.