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Re: [PWE3] draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt WG last call



Hi all,
I have a comment on the following statement below 

> However, the two directions
> are not completly independent from a state machine perspective. 
> Although the session failure detection is always performed by the 
> egress PE in the receive direction and it then notifies the ingress PE 
> using the Diagnostic Code 1 (Control Detection Time Expired), the 
> egress PE cannot transition BFD session back to the UP state unless 
> the ingress PE signaled back a Diagnostic code 3 (Neighbor signaled 
> session down) or an Init value in the Sta flags. I think it would be 
> useful to add this detail in Section 3.1.


Looking at the State Machine reported in draft-ietf-bfd-base-09.txt, at section 6.2, at section 6.8.6 ( updated by section 4.16.1 of draft-katz-ward-bfd-multipoint-02) the state transition occurs for defect ( in this case for expiration of the Detection Timer ) event and on the received BFD's State field (Sta field) and not on the base of the Diagnostic code (Diag field). 

Thank you.
Best regards, Annamaria


-----Original Message-----
From: pwe3-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:pwe3-bounces at ietf.org] On Behalf Of Carlos Pignataro
Sent: mercoledì 6 maggio 2009 2.42
To: AISSAOUI Mustapha
Cc: BOCCI Matthew; BUSSCHBACH Peter; pwe3 at ietf.org
Subject: Re: [PWE3] draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt WG last call

Mustapha,

On 5/5/2009 6:00 PM, AISSAOUI Mustapha wrote:
> All,
> I had a discussion with Peter regarding my comment (1) below and he is 
> right that the behaviour I quoted from Section 3.1 of this draft is 
> actually supported in the BFD base draft.

Delayed Ack -- thanks again, Peter.

> However, the two directions
> are not completly independent from a state machine perspective. 
> Although the session failure detection is always performed by the 
> egress PE in the receive direction and it then notifies the ingress PE 
> using the Diagnostic Code 1 (Control Detection Time Expired), the 
> egress PE cannot transition BFD session back to the UP state unless 
> the ingress PE signaled back a Diagnostic code 3 (Neighbor signaled 
> session down) or an Init value in the Sta flags. I think it would be 
> useful to add this detail in Section 3.1.

I'd be a bit hesitant to keep adding to that description in S3.1, as I fear it will make it more confusing. Note that the last sentence of that paragraph also points to pwe3-oam-msg-map for "how it further processes ...", and I think that more detailed description might belong there.

>  
> I appreciate if the authors also updated the terminology for the 
> "forward defect"  and "reverse defect" PW states to match the new 
> terminology used in draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map.

OK, there is one instance of "forward defect", and two instances of "reverse defect" in the document. What should they be changed to?

>  
> My comment on draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map still holds since there is 
> no such a thing as "ingress PE detection of failure" with BFD. Peter 
> already updated this in version 10 of the draft. Thanks.

For my clarification, this is already resolved in pwe3-oam-msg-map-10, correct?

>  
> Also, please ignore my comment (2) regarding the reply mode. Each PE 
> encapsulates the BFD packets according to one of the two encapsulation 
> methods as per the negotiated CV type. There is no need for sending 
> BFD messages out-of-band.

OK.

>  
> I have not seen a response to the other comments below.

Sorry again for the delay, please let me know if there's concerns unadressed.

Thanks,

-- Carlos.

>  
> Regards,
> Mustapha.
> 
>     ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>     *From:* Busschbach, Peter B (Peter)
>     [mailto:busschbach at alcatel-lucent.com]
>     *Sent:* Wednesday, April 08, 2009 3:23 PM
>     *To:* AISSAOUI Mustapha; BOCCI Matthew; pwe3 at ietf.org
>     *Subject:* RE: [PWE3] draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt WG last call
> 
>     MA> I do not believe that BFD as defined today supports this mode of
>     operation. This mode requires that each
>     MA> PE be able to declare the PW to be down in the receive direction
>     independently based on not receiving a
>     MA> number of BFD control messages during a number of time
>     intervals. This mode would be similar to the way
>     MA> ATM and Ethernet CC work.
>      
>     Mustapha,
>      
>     I had a different interpretation of the way BFD works. In the
>     asynchornous mode, which the vccv-bfd draft prescribes, each end
>     point checks for the arrival of control messages sent by the remote
>     end. If it does not receive control messages, it enters the DOWN
>     state. This is specified in section 6.2.
>      
>     Since the flow of control messages consists of two independent,
>     uni-directional flows, isn't it true that the downstream PE can
>     autonomously declare a receive defect?
>      
>     Peter
> 
>         ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>         *From:* pwe3-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:pwe3-bounces at ietf.org] *On
>         Behalf Of *AISSAOUI Mustapha
>         *Sent:* Wednesday, April 08, 2009 10:21 AM
>         *To:* Bocci, Matthew (Matthew); pwe3 at ietf.org
>         *Subject:* Re: [PWE3] draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt WG last 
> call
> 
>         Dear all,
>         as requested by Matthew, I reviewed this draft and I have
>         compiled my comments below.
>          
>         Regards,
>         Mustapha.
>         ---------------------------------------------------
> 
>         Comments on draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03
> 
>         1. Section 3.1, last paragraph states:
> 
>         "
> 
>         When the downstream PE (D-PE) does not receive BFD control
>         messages from its upstream peer PE (U-PE) during a certain
>         number of transmission intervals (a number provisioned by the
>         operator as Detect Mult), D-PE declares that the PW in its
>         receive direction is down. In other words, D-PE enters the
>         "forward defect" state for this PW. After this calculated
>         Detection Time, D-PE declares the session Down, and signals this
>         to the remote end via the State (Sta) with Diagnostic code 1
>         (Control Detection Time Expired). In turn, U-PE declares the PW
>         is down in its transmit direction setting the State to Down, and
>         it using Diagnostic code 3 (Neighbor signaled session down) in
>         its control messages to D-PE. U-PE enters the "reverse defect"
>         state for this PW. If needed, how it further processes this
>         error condition, and conveys this status to the attachment
>         circuits is out of the scope of this specification, and is
>         instead defined in [I-D.ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map].
> 
>         "
> 
>         MA> I do not believe that BFD as defined today supports this
>         mode of operation. This mode requires that each PE be able to
>         declare the PW to be down in the receive direction independently
>         based on not receiving a number of BFD control messages during a
>         number of time intervals. This mode would be similar to the way
>         ATM and Ethernet CC work.
> 
>         However, BFD requires that the sender of the messages declares
>         the state of the PW to be down if replies to its own BFD
>         messages were not received for a number of time intervals.
> 
>         Given that, the sender cannot tell which direction of the PW is
>         down, it must enter the PW receive defect state as explained in
>         draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map-09.txt. However, the receiver of the
>         messages can send a BFD status change asynchronously and in this
>         case the sender can be sure the defect is in the forward
>         direction, which means it must enter the PW trasmit defect state.
> 
>         I believe Appendix B of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map-09.txt must
>         also be corrected as it states:
> 
>         "
> 
>         Furthermore, the detection of a fault could occur at different
>         points in the network and there are several ways the observing
>         PE determines a fault exists:
> 
>         a. egress or ingress PE detection of failure (e.g. BFD)
> 
>         ....
> 
>         "
> 
>         2. Section 3.2 - BFD Encapsulation
> 
>         MA> We need to document how the reply to the BFD packet is
>         encapsulated. The following reply modes of "2- Reply via an
>         IPv4/IPv6 UDP packet", "3 - Reply via an IPv4/IPv6 UDP packet
>         with Router Alert", and "4 - Reply via application level control
>         channel" must be documented for the UDP/IP encapsulation. The
>         PW-ACH necapsulation can only support reply mode 4 since it
>         cannot be routed. I believe the relevant text for this is
>         covered in draft-ietf-bfd-mpls-07.txt.
> 
>         3. Section 3.3, item (3) reads:
> 
>         "
> 
>         4. Pseudowires that do not use a CW or L2SS using the PW
>         Associated Channel Header MUST NOT use the BFD CV Types 0x10 or
>         0x20 (i.e., PW-ACH encapsulation of BFD, without IP/UDP headers).
> 
>         A. PWs that use a PW-ACH include CC Type 1 (for both MPLS and
>         L2TPv3 as defined in Sections 5.1.1 and 6.1 of [RFC5085]), and
>         MPLS CC Types 2 and 3 when using a Control Word (as specified in
>         Sections 5.1.2 and 5.1.3 of [RFC5085]). This restriction stems
>         from the fact that the PW-ACH contains a Protocol Identification
>         (PID) field, the Channel Type.
> 
>         B. PWs that do not use a PW-ACH can use the VCCV BFD
>         encapsulation with IP/UDP headers, including its concurrent use
>         along with another CV Type that uses an encapsulation with IP
>         headers (e.g., ICMP Ping or LSP Ping). For example, as specified
>         in Section 7 of [RFC4385], a Pseudowire operating without CW
>         MUST NOT use the PW-ACH.
> 
>         "
> 
>         MA> This paragraph is trying to convey too many things and is
>         confusing. I propose we split it into the case of PW with ACH
>         and PW with no ACH. Here is a proposal which I believe covers
>         all the intended points:
> 
>         "
> 
>         4. A PW that uses the PW-ACH must signal CC Type 1 only in the
>         VCCV parameter included in the interface parameter field of the
>         PW ID FEC TLV or the sub-TLV interface parameter of the
>         Generalized PW ID FEC TLV as described in [RFC 5085].
> 
>         5. A PW that does not use a PW-ACH must signal CC Types 2 and/or
>         3 in the VCCV parameter included in the interface parameter
>         field of the PW ID FEC TLV or the sub-TLV interface parameter of
>         the Generalized PW ID FEC TLV as described in [RFC 5085]. For
>         example, this can be a PW which is configured not to use the CW
>         on the user packets. As specified in Section 7 of [RFC4385],
>         this PW MUST NOT use the PW-ACH.
> 
>         6. A PW that does not use the PW-ACH MUST NOT use the BFD CV
>         Types 0x10 or 0x20 (i.e., PW-ACH encapsulation of BFD, without
>         IP/UDP headers). This restriction stems from the fact that the
>         PW-ACH contains a Protocol Identification (PID) field, the
>         Channel Type, which is the only way to identify BFD messages
>         with these CV types.
> 
>         7. A PW can use the VCCV BFD encapsulation with IP/UDP headers,
>         including its concurrent use along with another CV type that
>         uses an encapsulation with IP headers (e.g., ICMP Ping or LSP
>         Ping), regardless if it is configured to use PW-ACH or not.
> 
>         "
> 
>         5. Section 3.3, item (4)
> 
>         "
> 
>         4. Only a single BFD CV Type can be selected and used. All BFD
>         CV Types are mutually exclusive with the rest, after selecting a
>         BFD CV Type, a node MUST NOT use any of the other three BFD CV
>         Types.
> 
>         "
> 
>         MA> It must be stated that in order to change the negotiation
>         and selection of the BFD CV types, the PW must be torn down and
>         re-signaled.
> 
>         ---------------------------------------------------
> 
>             ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>             *From:* pwe3-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:pwe3-bounces at ietf.org]
>             *On Behalf Of *BOCCI Matthew
>             *Sent:* Monday, March 09, 2009 11:09 AM
>             *To:* pwe3 at ietf.org
>             *Subject:* [PWE3] draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt WG last 
> call
> 
>             This is the start of working group last call on
>             draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt
> 
>             This draft can be found at:
> 
>             
> _http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-03.txt_
> 
> 
>             The last call will close on Monday 6th April 2009.
> 
>             Please read the document and provide feedback to the PWE3 list.
> 
>             Many thanks to the following, who have also kindly agreed to
>             review the draft and provide comments to the list:
>             Ben Niven-Jenkins
>             Mustapha Aissaoui
>             Luca Martini
>             Yaakov Stein
> 
>             Best regards
> 
>             Matthew
> 
> 
> 
> 
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