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Re: [RAI] [UPDATED] Gen-ART review of draft-c1222-transport-over-ip-00.txt
Avygdor Moise wrote:
Dear Mr. Gurbani,
Thank you for the very clear and detailed comments.
We reviewed your comments and compiled resolutions to each comment.
Our proposed remedies and explanations inserted in-line, each after your
relevant comment.
We shall await your follow-up instructions.
Dear Avy: Please see inline for one follow-up.
Other than the feedback below, I am perfectly happy with
the resolution you proposed for all other issues my review
had raised.
vkg> 5/ S3.1.1.3, top of page 12:
vkg> s/SHALL not automatically/SHALL NOT automatically/
avy>
avy> There seem to be a difference in the text that you refer to and the
text
avy> that is posted at
avy>
http://tools.ietf.org/search/draft-c1222-transport-over-ip-00#section-3.1.1.3,
avy> as submitted.
avy>
avy> 1) Section 3.1.1.3 is on page 13 not page 12
avy> 2) The text we submitted and the text posted contain a “SHALL NOT”
avy> and no “SHALL not”. There may be some conversion error on your side
avy> or you may be looking at an earlier attempted submission.
Ah, I see what the problem was...I had received -01 of your
draft as an attachment from Gen-ART coordinator to review.
So, while the section numbers match, the page count may
be different between -00 (which is in the IETF archives)
and -01 (which appears NOT to be in the IETF archives.)
The "SHALL not" problem I point out above occurs in -01,
in the fourth line of S3.1.1.3 (which happens to be on the
top of page 12 in -01.)
Hope that helps.
Ciao,
- vijay
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