[RTG-DIR] RtgDir Review: draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-evpn-09.txt

John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net> Mon, 12 January 2015 19:35 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir.

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-evpn-09.txt
Reviewer: John Drake
Review Date: 12-Jan-2015
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:

    No issues found.  This document is ready for publication.

Comments:

    I think the document is well written and easily understood.  

Major Issues:

    No major issues found 

Minor Issues:

    No minor issues found 


Yours Irrespectively,

John