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"Keyur Patel (keyupate)" <keyupate@cisco.com> Wed, 27 April 2016 22:30 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir.

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-05
Reviewer: Keyur Patel
Review Date: 27-Apr-2016
Intended Status: Standards Track


Summary:
The document is well written and seems ready for the publication. No major issues found. Minor nits are listed below.

Major Issues:
None.

Minor Issues


  1.  Intended Status: "Standards Track" Please.
  2.  Section 1, 3 paragraph: S/will be described/is described.

  3.

Section 11.1, Do you need to define any error conditions where multiple flag bits are set?

Regards,
Keyur

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