I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area 
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments 
just like any other last call comments.

The draft updates RFC 4933, the EPP Contacts Mapping spec.  The updates 
listed are relatively minor - updates to references and a few minor 
updates to text.

Many of my comments below apply to language that was in RFC4933, but 
perhaps it is OK to suggest changes from the original at this point.

First:  EPP, as in RFC4930 and draft *-rfc4930bis-01*, employs a very 
simple authentication scheme that is cleartext password based. 
It therefore mandates:

                      Specifically, EPP instances MUST be protected using
    a transport mechanism or application protocol that provides
    integrity, confidentiality, and mutual strong client-server
    authentication.

This mandate is inherited by the rfc4933bis draft, which also says

              Both client and server MUST ensure that authorization
    information is stored and exchanged with high-grade encryption
    mechanisms to provide privacy services.

I would expect that this would make the protocol subject to channel 
binding issues.  I probably am not up on the whole idea, but the I 
reviewed RFC5060 and the description of the problem sure sounds like it 
applies to EPP as well.

OTOH, I seem to recall several drafts recently that relied on the security 
of their transport layers, and no one has been talking about how they deal 
with channel binding.  Maybe I'm way off.

Also, the security considerations there and in rfc4930bis do not address 
the cases when completion of a pending request is communicated by an 
out-of-band mechanism.  I don't know if there are security concerns for 
those notifications, but given that they are not covered by the security 
of the transport mechanism, advice would be good.

sect 2.2, page 5

    -  pendingCreate, pendingDelete, pendingRenew, pendingTransfer,
       pendingUpdate

       A transform command has been processed for the object, but the
       action has not been completed by the server.  Server operators can
       delay action completion for a variety of reasons, such as to allow
       for human review or third-party action.  A transform command that
       is processed, but whose requested action is pending, is noted with
       response code 1001.

    When the requested action has been completed, the pendingCreate,
    pendingDelete, pendingTransfer, or pendingUpdate status value MUST be
    removed.

Later, sect 3.3 page 27 says (indirectly) that the status MUST be set if 
the action is delayed:

              The status of the corresponding object MUST clearly reflect
    processing of the pending action.

If the MUST for removal is here, it would be good to be consistent and put 
the MUST for setting the status as well.  (As a matter of fact, it would 
be nice to mention the pending<action> status being set in the description 
of the transform commands as well.)

(By the way: why is a pendingRenew status defined when section 3.2 says 
there is no mapping defined for the Renew command?)

Same section, immediately following:

              All clients involved in the transaction MUST be notified
    using a service message that the action has been completed and that
    the status of the object has changed.

Later sections (p 17 sec 3.2 and p 28 sec 3.3) add qualifications to this 
MUST: "Other notification methods MAY be used" and "or by using an 
out-of-band mechanism."

sect 2.9, page 7

                                A server operator MUST reject any
    transaction that requests disclosure practices that do not conform to
    the announced data collection policy with a 2308 error response code.

When servers are compling with client specified exceptional disclosure 
handling for some data elements, does this same requirement apply, and 
with the same error code?

sect 3.1.2, page 14


The <info> response example contains:


    S:        <contact:voice x="1234">+1.7035555555</contact:voice>
    S:        <contact:fax>+1.7035555556</contact:fax>
...
    S:        <contact:disclose flag="0">
    S:          <contact:voice/>
    S:          <contact:email/>
    S:        </contact:disclose>


Section 2.9, page 7 says

                                  In conjunction with this disclosure
    requirement, this mapping includes data elements that allow a client
    to identify elements that require exceptional server operator
    handling to allow or restrict disclosure to third parties.

but then also

                                    A value of "false" or "0" (zero)
    notes a client preference to not allow disclosure of the specified
    elements as an exception to the stated data collection policy.

Between "require .. operator handling" and "client preference", I'm not 
sure of the obligation the server has to refrain from disclosing data 
elements that the client has requested be prohibited from disclosing

But at any rate, this example seems to me to be ignoring the client's 
request.  True?  If so, and allowed, it would deserve more discussion.

sect 3.2, page 17

    Server operators SHOULD confirm that a client is authorized to
    perform a transform command on a given object.  Any attempt to
    transform an object by an unauthorized client MUST be rejected, and
    the server MUST return a 2201 response code to the client to note
    that the client lacks privileges to execute the requested command.

Is that "MUST be rejected" only in the case that the server operator 
decides that they will confirm authorization?

sect 3.2.2, page 20

    A contact object SHOULD NOT be deleted if it is associated with other
    known objects.  An associated contact SHOULD NOT be deleted until
    associations with other known objects have been broken.  A server
    SHOULD notify clients that object relationships exist by sending a
    2305 error response code when a <delete> command is attempted and
    fails due to existing object relationships.

Do these object associations and object relationships include cases where 
the status is "clientDeleteProhibited" or "serverDeleteProhibited"?  If 
not, should there be this (or some other) error message in those status 
cases as well?  The prohibition status values don't seem to show up in the 
discussions of server response to commands.  Perhaps those prohibitions 
are covered under the "An EPP error response MUST be returned if the ... 
command cannot be processed for any reason".  I believe an explicit 
discussion would be good, including the appropriate error code.  (Same 
comment in the Transfer and Update commands.)

sect 3.2.5, page 24


    At least one <contact:add>, <contact:rem>, or <contact:chg> element
    MUST be provided if the command is not being extended.  All of these
    elements MAY be omitted if an <update> extension is present.  The
    <contact:add> and <contact:rem> elements contain the following child
    elements:

    -  One or more <contact:status> elements that contain status values
       to be associated with or removed from the object.  When specifying
       a value to be removed, only the attribute value is significant;
       element text is not required to match a value for removal.

Who is responsible for ensuring the valid status combinations discussed in 
sect 2.2?  I.e., if the client is adding a prohibition, does the server 
remove the "ok" status or must the client include that removal in the 
update?  if the removal is in the same update, does the order in the 
update matter (removal first?)?

Note: the example adds a prohibition without removing an "ok" status, 
implying that the client is not responsible.  But it is not necessarily 
the case that the "ok" status was there, so the implication isn't certain.

sect 3.3, page 27

rfc4930bis says:


                                       The server MUST also notify the
    client when offline processing of the action has been completed.
    Object mappings SHOULD describe standard formats for notices that
    describe completion of offline processing.

Section 3.3 contains an example of the contents of the notification for a 
create command.  But Delete, Update and Transfer may also be pending. 
Should there be a description of their notification service messages also?

--Sandy