Re: [Simple] Multi-party Chat version 05 submitted

[Adrian Georgescu <ag at ag-projects.com>]

After reviewing this document, from an implementor perspective the  
draft addresses all my needs to build such a conference system based  
on MSRP protocol. I personally have no further suggestions for  
improving it and I would like to see this going through the process  
for becoming a proposed standard.

--
Adrian





On Oct 5, 2009, at 4:21 PM, Geir Arne Sandbakken wrote:

> A new version of “Multi-party Chat Using the Message Session Relay  
> Protocol (MSRP)” has been submitted.
>
> The new version can be found here:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-simple-chat-05.txt
>
> Additions and changes from -04 based on the WGLC Summary:
> 1. Architectural diagrams or descriptions clarifying MSRP switch  
> role towards MSRP relay, endpoints and focus
> - Added diagram showing Focus UA, MSRP relays and MSRP switch. -  
> Added reference to MSRP relays to make implementers compare  
> mechanisms.
> 2. Clean up Section 6.2 on Private Messages
> - Removed text regarding reports and responses.
> - Made reference to regular messages - and removed duplicate text.
> 3. Various Nickname clarifications: terminology, privacy and security
> - The review listed the Nickname as a missing identifier. Nicknames  
> in simple-chat are not part of the identifiers of which one can  
> populate in the To header field of the Message/CPIM wrapper.  
> Nicknames are more like display names, but unique inside a chat  
> room. - Rephrased section 7.1, and cleaned up the terminology.
> - Added a Nickname paragraph under the security considerations.
> - Did not add a time out - as a Nickname is not an identifier to be  
> used for message relaying. Only used for display purposes, and it is  
> the policy of the focus to apply any constraints.
> 4. Add normative reference to P-Asserted-Identity
> - Done.
> 5. Example of a Conference Event Package notification with a  
> nickname element
> - Done
> 6. Lots of requirement clean ups. Scary.
> - Removed REQ-2 talking about other media types
> - Rephrased REQ-8
> - Cleaned up REQ-9
> - Cleaned up REQ-10
> 7. Clarification around conference "unaware" participants
> - Added text under 5.2 "Joining a chat room". - Made clear that the  
> rest of the document requires clients to be conference aware.
> 8. MSRP switch needs to be made Message-Id stateful. Add text.
> - Added text under section 6 "Sending and receiving IM messages"
> 9. More reporting model update - and removal.
> - Removed a lot of normative text. - Added separate section for  
> report and response handling
> 10. Remove mixed media references
> - Removed REQ-2 talking about other media types
> - Removed all references to other media types.
> 11. Add text on side effect when removing chat rooms.
> - Added text to section 5.x
> 12. Add Multi-chunk example
> - Done
> 13. Remove GRUU example
> - Done
> 14. Add error response on private message
> - Done
> 15. Various editorial fixes and simplifications
> - Done
> 16. Add Mary and Ben to Acknowledgements
> - Done
>
>
> Thanks,
> Geir
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